Krisluvsdogs Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Well, as you all know I rarely update my writings. I 've been busy with preparations for school which starts next week. Anyway, I read a fanfic that inspired this poem. It can b viewed several ways, either unrequited love, couples falling out with each other, or bad break ups and pining feelings. so here it is. It's Odd You hold her hand when a week ago you held mine, You smile at her weak joke when you would roll your eyes at mine, You act the same when your with her as you did when you were with me. It's odd, isn't it? It's odd that jealousy turns to melancholy and envy turns to nostalgia. It's odd that I smile to see you happy when before it would make me sick. I remember your laugh. I remember the lies to stay apart instead of the truth. I remember the realization that we've faded. It's odd isn't it? It's odd that realization turns to peace instead of heartache. It's odd that fading feelings create a stronger soul instead of a weak heart. Is it because my feelings are fading or is it because they were never really there? Is it because I'm over you or was I ever really into you? Is it because I'm older and wiser now or is it because I see how our affair was ill-fated compared to your love with her? Is it odd that I'm over you? Is it odd that I don't feel anything for you anymore? What do you think? It's odd , isn't it? I think it is. Is it odd, or is it just the way it's suppose to be? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Well, as you all know I rarely update my writings. I 've been busy with preparations for school which starts next week. Anyway, I read a fanfic that inspired this poem. It can b viewed several ways, either unrequited love, couples falling out with each other, or bad break ups and pining feelings. so here it is. It's Odd You hold her hand when a week ago you held mine, You smile at her weak joke when you would roll your eyes at mine, You act the same when your with her as you did when you were with me. It's odd, isn't it? It's odd that jealousy turns to melancholy and envy turns to nostalgia. It's odd that I smile to see you happy when before it would make me sick. I remember your laugh. I remember the lies to stay apart instead of the truth. I remember the realization that we've faded. It's odd isn't it? It's odd that realization turns to peace instead of heartache. It's odd that fading feelings create a stronger soul instead of a weak heart. Is it because my feelings are fading or is it because they were never really there? Is it because I'm over you or was I ever really into you? Is it because I'm older and wiser now or is it because I see how our affair was ill-fated compared to your love with her? Is it odd that I'm over you? Is it odd that I don't feel anything for you anymore? What do you think? It's odd , isn't it? I think it is. Is it odd, or is it just the way it's suppose to be? forgot to turn it green srry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Well, as you all know I rarely update my writings. I 've been busy with preparations for school which starts next week. Anyway, I read a fanfic that inspired this poem. It can b viewed several ways, either unrequited love, couples falling out with each other, or bad break ups and pining feelings. so here it is. It's Odd You hold her hand when a week ago you held mine, You smile at her weak joke when you would roll your eyes at mine, You act the same when your with her as you did when you were with me. It's odd, isn't it? It's odd that jealousy turns to melancholy and envy turns to nostalgia. It's odd that I smile to see you happy when before it would make me sick. I remember your laugh. I remember the lies to stay apart instead of the truth. I remember the realization that we've faded. It's odd isn't it? It's odd that realization turns to peace instead of heartache. It's odd that fading feelings create a stronger soul instead of a weak heart. Is it because my feelings are fading or is it because they were never really there? Is it because I'm over you or was I ever really into you? Is it because I'm older and wiser now or is it because I see how our affair was ill-fated compared to your love with her? Is it odd that I'm over you? Is it odd that I don't feel anything for you anymore? What do you think? It's odd , isn't it? I think it is. Is it odd, or is it just the way it's suppose to be? forgot to turn it green srry Looks green to me. * * Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Your poem was amazing. Your depth of understanding and communication of that knowledge is incredible. *hands The Platinum Moon Award to Krisluvsdogs* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 gee thanks Here's another Unsure I'm unsure of my path Unsure of my course I'm unsure of my faith when things go bad Unsure if I will get lost I'm unsure if I'll make friends Unsure of the times I'm unsure but God will lead me on I wrote this in response of starting college this week. It's seem like yesterday that I was prepare to go to high school. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 my siggy won't let me edit it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 gee thanks Here's another Unsure I'm unsure of my path Unsure of my course I'm unsure of my faith when things go bad Unsure if I will get lost I'm unsure if I'll make friends Unsure of the times I'm unsure but God will lead me on I wrote this in response of starting college this week. It's seem like yesterday that I was prepare to go to high school. Whoa... I can believe you are starting college this week either! How time has escaped me! Good luck this year. You are going to love it. As for your poem, you need to have a book where you keep a collection of all your written works. This is another great poem! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 my siggy won't let me edit it I will let HampsterKing know. Hopefully he will get it fixed quickly. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 gee thanks Here's another Unsure I'm unsure of my path Unsure of my course I'm unsure of my faith when things go bad Unsure if I will get lost I'm unsure if I'll make friends Unsure of the times I'm unsure but God will lead me on I wrote this in response of starting college this week. It's seem like yesterday that I was prepare to go to high school. Wow, college! I forgot you were a year older than me. Good luck with everything! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted September 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2009 thanks, the hw part isn't so great but i'm happy to report that i got a a on my math quizz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 13, 2009 Report Share Posted September 13, 2009 thanks, the hw part isn't so great but i'm happy to report that i got a a on my math quizz Congratulations on the A!!! HW... takes too much time, disrupts goof-off time and is a necessary evil. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 yes, because of the hw i haven't been on... also I'm in a play or cabera really that will be all year long and not only do i act and sing in it but i'm the stage manger for the whole thing... no time really to breathe. Here's a new one... I Don't Miss You I don't miss you I don't think about you I don't feel a thing when our eyes meet I don't miss you I don't miss you because I can feel you with me always You're always on my mind The world stops when you look at me I don't miss you because You're always there and another one... For my friend Eve, Dividing It's hard to start thinking in me terms when its been us forever It's hard to be single when I'm used to being taken It's hard to flirt with others and not feel guilty about it It's hard dividing our lives in two It's hard to go on with out you It's hard to look at couples together and not wish you were here It's hard here others take about their loves and not get lonely It's hard to wish others well when I feel anything but fine It's hard dividing my life from yours It's hard to get on without you but I'm doing it, how about you? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Sounds like your life does not have a spare moment! Thanks for posting the awesome poems! You are so talented!!! They are phenomenal!!! *hands Krisluvsdogs The Red Rose Award* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 two of my best friend recently broke up with their boyfriends and I wrote this for one of them because she is taking it hard, that and she moved half way across country to be with him and now he's gone... *wants to punch him* Thank You! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 Here's another peom I wrote for another friend who is also in a hard transitional time.... For Kelsey, Balance How do I find balance? How do I get back lost time? How can I do this? I need to find balance. How do I find a time to mend the blurred lines between us? How can I fit you in and still have time for others? What do I do? Where is the balance? How do I live my life and stay in yours? Do I shun one experence for another? Do I chose between them? How can I when I want them both so much? What do I do? My heart, I ask you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 8, 2009 Report Share Posted October 8, 2009 Great, inspirational poem. Thank you for posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 For my friend Emily, I'm not asking... I'm not asking you to change your life I'm not asking you to live a lie I'm asking you a simple question I'm not asking for you sign your life over to me I'm not asking for an excuse... I'm asking if you wan to be my friend and then maybe more Not for you to die for me It's not that hard But all you do is put up a wall something which I didn't ask for For my co workers, and others who lost a loved one... I can't wish you back I can't see you anymore I can't call you and hear your voice I can't hug you And I can't say I love you I can't wish for you But that doesn't stop me from looking for you in a crowd Or dialing your number to hear your voice mail Or hugging a cold wet stone on your birthday And I still stop now and then to mutter I love you to the air I can't wish you back But I wish to see you again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 * it's excuse not exc...use srry Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 For my friend Emily, I'm not asking... I'm not asking you to change your life I'm not asking you to live a lie I'm asking you a simple question I'm not asking for you sign your life over to me I'm not asking for an excuse... I'm asking if you wan to be my friend and then maybe more Not for you to die for me It's not that hard But all you do is put up a wall something which I didn't ask for For my co workers, and others who lost a loved one... I can't wish you back I can't see you anymore I can't call you and hear your voice I can't hug you And I can't say I love you I can't wish for you But that doesn't stop me from looking for you in a crowd Or dialing your number to hear your voice mail Or hugging a cold wet stone on your birthday And I still stop now and then to mutter I love you to the air I can't wish you back But I wish to see you again *cries* Those are sooooo beautiful. You definitely deserve The Red Rose Award for those beautiful works of art. *hands award to Krisluvsdogs* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 14, 2009 Report Share Posted October 14, 2009 * it's excuse not exc...use srry Fixed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2009 thank you! It has come to my attention that I really need to update my poem file on my computer because one day it will be a book... i hope! So, yeah... I working on it... course it may never get done due to school but one can hope... hehe Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 27, 2009 Report Share Posted October 27, 2009 thank you! It has come to my attention that I really need to update my poem file on my computer because one day it will be a book... i hope! So, yeah... I working on it... course it may never get done due to school but one can hope... hehe I will buy a copy of your first book. Please update your poem file. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 i doubt it will be publish... i'm not sure i want to... but I will email it to you... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 28, 2009 Report Share Posted October 28, 2009 i doubt it will be publish... i'm not sure i want to... but I will email it to you... I am saving this email to show you just in case you forget. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted October 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2009 hahahahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 31, 2009 Report Share Posted October 31, 2009 hahahahaha It has been stored electronically and on paper so you will not be able to escape! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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