Krisluvsdogs Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 Hey! Hamperster Dance members, I'm alive. i've been really busy lately and haven't been on much so I'm srry if i caused worry and just wanted to pist that I'm here still. i'll leave with my lastest work... SoulMates You pass him in the hall He smirks at you and laughs You're his arch enemy and the feelings of hate are double in return for him You look away, unable to make up an insult But deep in your heart you sense that you should look back But being a high schooler you continue never seeing the brown eyes that follow you down the hall He walks past you in the lobby You ignore his subtle jab that's his greeting and continue to study In college you never have time to look for fun, real fun with a real man Yet that's an excuse your friends say as he passes by with a new girl on his arm You bump into him in stairwell Papers fly everywhere Yet as your eyes meet you know it's time it's time to stop hiding behind the hate of a child, the dislike of a young woman, and the acts of a fellow doctor. it's time to find your soulmate, the one that is right in front of you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 Hey! Hamperster Dance members, I'm alive. i've been really busy lately and haven't been on much so I'm srry if i caused worry and just wanted to pist that I'm here still. i'll leave with my lastest work... SoulMates You pass him in the hall He smirks at you and laughs You're his arch enemy and the feelings of hate are double in return for him You look away, unable to make up an insult But deep in your heart you sense that you should look back But being a high schooler you continue never seeing the brown eyes that follow you down the hall He walks past you in the lobby You ignore his subtle jab that's his greeting and continue to study In college you never have time to look for fun, real fun with a real man Yet that's an excuse your friends say as he passes by with a new girl on his arm You bump into him in stairwell Papers fly everywhere Yet as your eyes meet you know its time it's time to stop hiding behind the hate of a child, the dislike of a young woman, and the acts of a fellow doctor. it's time to find your soulmate, the one that is right in front of you. Thanks for stopping in. We were concerned about you and are happy to hear that you came to let us now things are okay. Great poem. You are a most talented writer!!! Please go to Glowurm's topic (via the link) and pick a face. We need all the faces to be chosen for the story and there are three remaining. http://www.hampsterboard.com/board/index.p...mp;#entry141074 Even though you may not be here, we need for Glowurm to start his story and he won't do that until all the faces are chosen. Thank you. And please do stop in and pist again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 lol opps! I will I've got some new works up a head to look forward to and what not so c u later Hampster Dance... for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 lol opps! I will I've got some new works up a head to look forward to and what not so c u later Hampster Dance... for now. We'll be here waiting! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Pain There was no pain when she first faced him There was no pain when she landed the first hit out of pure luck There it was... swinging though her as she stumbled to gain her footing There was pain , more now as she blocked hit after hit he was taunting her, she knew it That hurt to but oddly more then the blade slicing though flesh suddenly, Pain was everywhere, she had let him past. She had failed her friends, her family, and her duty to her town She gasped as cold air seemed to gasp her and engulf her Pain was everywhere as she gasped"I'm cold" But the pain left as she saw her teacher knell near her and said"I know" This is a poem about a fight I'm going to have in one of my stories when its posted I let you guess which one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 PainThere was no pain when she first faced him There was no pain when she landed the first hit out of pure luck There it was... swinging though her as she stumbled to gain her footing There was pain , more now as she blocked hit after hit he was taunting her, she knew it That hurt to but oddly more then the blade slicing though flesh suddenly, Pain was everywhere, she had let him past. She had failed her friends, her family, and her duty to her town She gasped as cold air seemed to gasp her and engulf her Pain was everywhere as she gasped"I'm cold" But the pain left as she saw her teacher kneel near her and said"I know" This is a poem about a fight I'm going to have in one of my stories when its posted I let you guess which one. Your poem is fantastic. Now I have to go back and find the story! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Its not up yet I've got something else to go up before that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I've got two more poems to post but first I need to type up the stories I have. It may take a while. MERRY HAMPSTER CHRISTMAS to you all! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I've got two more poems to post but first I need to type up the stories I have. It may take a while. MERRY HAMPSTER CHRISTMAS to you all! We will wait. Merry Christmas back to you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Watching, Waiting, and Winning She walks past you, catching a bit of her perfume as you pass You smirk and laugh to cover up the feeling of nervousness you get when she is around She hates you and knowing this you return her feelings , even if you wish you didn't have to she looks away and walks past you knowing she couldn't make up an insult You wish she would look back to see your apolitic smile But she leaves you behind on her way to class with your eyes trailing after her You pass her in lobby , her blond hair braid and out of her glasses that help her scan the page You use a insult as a greeting, but she is unfazed, by the greeting that has become part of your love and hate relationship You walk past her and wonder if she was still with him, refusing to give him a name because you know that he'll never care for her the way you do There are rumors that she really likes you but you ignore them and the subtle hints your friends leave as you walk past her with some girl on your arm, you wonder if the girl knows that she's there only because she' to busy studying She bumps into you in the stairwell Your papers and her's scatter mixing on the floor You know that you should leave, that hope she cares sailed long ago, but your eyes catch hers She knows , just as you do , that its time Its time to stop hiding behind a image, that you can't win her though jeoleous, and the time to end your sorrow dqys and lonely nights its time to gain what you spend your life during by watching, waiting, and now by winning, its time to have your life with your soul mate, the one in front of you this is the guy's version of Soulmate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 You are such a talented writer!!!! Thank you for posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted January 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 it sounds a lot better after i posted it, thank goodness. i didn't quite like it when i was posting it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 11, 2009 Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 it sounds a lot better after i posted it, thank goodness. i didn't quite like it when i was posting it. I loved it! Of course, you are always your worst critic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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