Krisluvsdogs Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 I know I know what it is like to hear voices call you names I know when the air is cold that it is night even if I can't see it. I know that standing on the edge could mean I could fall;yet I stay there. I know what it is like to evil and good trapped inside battle to be on top. I know what living is and what dying is , yet I feel like I'm neither. I know what it is to be this why but I can't change, Even if I wanted to. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted July 23, 2008 Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 Very interesting and thought provoking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted July 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2008 it is really loosely based on a fanfic that I love Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted July 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2008 On the Other side I can hear footsteps near me. I can see the light from under the door. I know he is near but I won't run any more. The door knob jiggles, I can't help my wince. She is sleeping soundly, mommy wanted us safe. But left us with him, My sister groans. The door is pounded on as the hungry lion wants in the lambs pen. Mommy's staff looks so big and huge in fount of me, she should hold it not me. I can't run, I promised. Then fate strikes with his voice coming though; begging" Let your daddy in, Karenesa"( I'll figure out Karen's Egypt name later) "Your not my daddy" I say as I prepare to cross over with mommy's staff in my hand. On the other side is a man I don't like but to protect my twin I'll go... On the other side. Â Â It's more like a story but if you don't get then I'll explain. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Another thought provoking story-poem. Thank you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I didn't really think it was a poem but oh well thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 I didn't really think it was a poem but oh well thanks! I called it a S-T-O-R-Y-poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted July 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 hahaha  Love Love is hard. Love is knowing. Love is watching. Love is more important then anything. Love is waiting. Love is teasing you everyday because then I have a reason to talk to you. Love is being insult even though you love being called a klutz or dimwitted if it means you are near them. Love is a lot of emotions and words. Love is you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 From Death's Door I'm in the same place but it is different from before. I shut my eyes and it seems that I opened them in a different time. She saved me, bought me back from death to do what I do best. She bought me back to solve the world's mysteries. So I'll do my best to do her proud. I'll chase my enemies to the ends of this planet to keep this town safe. I'll step away from Death's door to once again join the living. To find the thrill of the hunt again. Â guess which fiction character this is about?!? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 2, 2008 Report Share Posted August 2, 2008 From Death's DoorI'm in the same place but it is different from before. I shut my eyes and it seems that I opened them in a different time. She saved me, bought me back from death to do what I do best. She bought me back to solve the world's mysteries. So I'll do my best to do her proud. I'll chase my enemies to the ends of this planet to keep this town safe. I'll step away from Death's door to once again join the living. To find the thrill of the hunt again. Â guess which fiction character this is about?!? Another great written piece... can't think of who. Perhaps after a cup of coffee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 please look at Warm Wishes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 7, 2008 Report Share Posted August 7, 2008 please look at Warm Wishes I hope your father gets well soon. You and your family will be in my thoughts, hearts and prayers. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krisluvsdogs Posted August 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Looking I'm looking for the cure. I'm looking for the poison. I'm looking for the one that is pure. I'm looking for the chosen. Is it in here? or over there? I'm looking for myself. I'm looking for you. Could you help me look, or will I still be looking? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 I like this. You are really talented. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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