xMyOwnMindx Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 and heres a time id say im okay with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes which is what ultimately makes me sound more down most of the time anyway its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up to the second i fall asleep my only time of peace and its so difficult to get there its not that i want to be a problem its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her it just hits me worse later when im alone and there isnt anyone to tell i think id rather be straightfoward then explode later cuz in the end theres something in my head and whatever plan of action i choose to take ill feel the same in the end its hard to explain this to you its compelling mesmerizing calling me in everytime i see that number go down a little happy note is played inside and even time i feel that pain i think about the good that i'll feel later sure its hard and yea it kinda stinks but in the end this is all ive ever wanted i need this i will become this its in me already now all i need to do is be strong. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 and heres a time id say im okay with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes which is what ultimately makes me sound more down most of the time anyway its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up to the second i fall asleep my only time of peace and its so difficult to get there its not that i want to be a problem its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her it just hits me worse later when im alone and there isnt anyone to tell i think id rather be straightfoward then explode later cuz in the end theres something in my head and whatever plan of action i choose to take ill feel the same in the end its hard to explain this to you its compelling mesmerizing calling me in everytime i see that number go down a little happy note is played inside and even time i feel that pain i think about the good that i'll feel later sure its hard and yea it kinda stinks but in the end this is all ive ever wanted i need this i will become this its in me already now all i need to do is be strong. The poem is great as are all your poems, but the visual delivery struck me as superb. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 and heres a time id say im okay with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes which is what ultimately makes me sound more down most of the time anyway its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up to the second i fall asleep my only time of peace and its so difficult to get there its not that i want to be a problem its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her it just hits me worse later when im alone and there isnt anyone to tell i think id rather be straightfoward then explode later cuz in the end theres something in my head and whatever plan of action i choose to take ill feel the same in the end its hard to explain this to you its compelling mesmerizing calling me in everytime i see that number go down a little happy note is played inside and even time i feel that pain i think about the good that i'll feel later sure its hard and yea it kinda stinks but in the end this is all ive ever wanted i need this i will become this its in me already now all i need to do is be strong. The poem is great as are all your poems, but the visual delivery struck me as superb. thanks im about to go write another hope you like it lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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