mentally&physically

[xMyOwnMindx]

and heres a time id say im okay

with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside

but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes

which is what ultimately makes me sound more down

most of the time anyway

its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up

to the second i fall asleep

my only time of peace

and its so difficult to get there

 

its not that i want to be a problem

its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her

it just hits me worse later

when im alone

and there isnt anyone to tell

i think id rather be straightfoward

then explode later

cuz in the end

theres something in my head

and whatever plan of action i choose to take

ill feel the same in the end

 

its hard to explain this to you

its compelling

mesmerizing

calling me in

everytime i see that number go down

a little happy note is played inside

and even time i feel that pain

i think about the good that i'll feel later

 

sure its hard

and yea it kinda stinks

but in the end this is all ive ever wanted

i need this

i will become this

its in me already

now all i need to do

is be

 

strong.

[Horatio]

and heres a time id say im okay

with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside

but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes

which is what ultimately makes me sound more down

most of the time anyway

its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up

to the second i fall asleep

my only time of peace

and its so difficult to get there

 

its not that i want to be a problem

its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her

it just hits me worse later

when im alone

and there isnt anyone to tell

i think id rather be straightfoward

then explode later

cuz in the end

theres something in my head

and whatever plan of action i choose to take

ill feel the same in the end

 

its hard to explain this to you

its compelling

mesmerizing

calling me in

everytime i see that number go down

a little happy note is played inside

and even time i feel that pain

i think about the good that i'll feel later

 

sure its hard

and yea it kinda stinks

but in the end this is all ive ever wanted

i need this

i will become this

its in me already

now all i need to do

is be

 

strong.

The poem is great as are all your poems, but the visual delivery struck me as superb.

[xMyOwnMindx]

and heres a time id say im okay

with the random thoughts of emptiness eating slowly inside

but i cant feel it untill i think about it sometimes

which is what ultimately makes me sound more down

most of the time anyway

its like a disapointment ray shines down on me when i wake up

to the second i fall asleep

my only time of peace

and its so difficult to get there

 

its not that i want to be a problem

its cuz i feel it even if i choose to ignore her

it just hits me worse later

when im alone

and there isnt anyone to tell

i think id rather be straightfoward

then explode later

cuz in the end

theres something in my head

and whatever plan of action i choose to take

ill feel the same in the end

 

its hard to explain this to you

its compelling

mesmerizing

calling me in

everytime i see that number go down

a little happy note is played inside

and even time i feel that pain

i think about the good that i'll feel later

 

sure its hard

and yea it kinda stinks

but in the end this is all ive ever wanted

i need this

i will become this

its in me already

now all i need to do

is be

 

strong.

The poem is great as are all your poems, but the visual delivery struck me as superb.

thanks im about to go write another hope you like it lol