dog lover Posted September 8, 2007 Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 8, 2007 Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. ok, i just have to finish it. cant think of an ending. thank you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. ok, i just have to finish it. cant think of an ending. thank you! Take your time. You know where to find me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. ok, i just have to finish it. cant think of an ending. thank you! Take your time. You know where to find me. STUPID WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!!! i can't think of an ending. so i don't know how close i am to the end when i don't know what the end is. i've been able to write a bit more, but...i need a definitive ending. and i can't think of one. do u want me to email u what i have so far? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 9, 2007 Report Share Posted September 9, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. ok, i just have to finish it. cant think of an ending. thank you! Take your time. You know where to find me. STUPID WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!!! i can't think of an ending. so i don't know how close i am to the end when i don't know what the end is. i've been able to write a bit more, but...i need a definitive ending. and i can't think of one. do u want me to email u what i have so far? Sure!!! That would be perfect! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 10, 2007 Hi- I woke up at about 3 in the morning last night and had a kind of vision/fantasy involving Elton John....it kept me up for about an hour, going through it all in my head. I got up this morning and started typing it on my computer, and the words just seemed to flow out...usually I don't have a very high opinion of my work, but I was drawn to this...it kept me captivated all day, because i had to go to see my grandparents and so couldn't continue until i got home (you'll see why) and it seems to have the elements of a short story, packing a lot in with just the right amount of words, etc, etc UNFORTUNATELY... it is a bit "mature" for this board. which is sad because i don't want to cut any of it, but i want comments and constructive criticism on my writing. due to the "mature" themes, i typed it on my computer, which my parents never go on, as opposed to writing it on paper which they could find...so i don't know what to do...the story is almsot finished (i think) i got as far as my late-night mind wanderings went, but it still needed an ending so that's what im working on. any ideas on what i should do? ~Liz Email it to me. ok, i just have to finish it. cant think of an ending. thank you! Take your time. You know where to find me. STUPID WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!!! i can't think of an ending. so i don't know how close i am to the end when i don't know what the end is. i've been able to write a bit more, but...i need a definitive ending. and i can't think of one. do u want me to email u what i have so far? Sure!!! That would be perfect! i have decided to leave it as is anyway...i feel that anything more would ruin it....even though it doesnt really have much of an ending but whatever! i still like it. it makes me feel happy inside.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 11, 2007 Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 Received your story. I really, REALLY love it. I wish it was 400 pages. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 11, 2007 Received your story. I really, REALLY love it. I wish it was 400 pages. oh. wow. cool. thank u! so how much of it do u think can be posted? either tell me or just post as much of it as u can.... THANK YOU! so.....any specific comments? did i give u a heart attack? lol....ok i just have to wait for ur reply now...glad u liked it! ~Liz EJ+me= Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2007 DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS HORATIO!!! p.s. cool new avatar..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 14, 2007 Report Share Posted September 14, 2007 DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS HORATIO!!! p.s. cool new avatar..... Thanks for the avatar compliments, but I brought this one in for Mr. Moosey. In order for him to know it is here, I have to use it. As for the hanging part... at least I did leave you hanging upside down by your toenails. I have to read it a couple more times. I am only worried if a young person reads it. Please give me one more day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 15, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2007 DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS HORATIO!!! p.s. cool new avatar..... Thanks for the avatar compliments, but I brought this one in for Mr. Moosey. In order for him to know it is here, I have to use it. As for the hanging part... at least I did leave you hanging upside down by your toenails. I have to read it a couple more times. I am only worried if a young person reads it. Please give me one more day. Ok, since u asked so nicely! sorry if i got a little impatient.... yeah, i know it's a bit tricky to edit. hopefully it's not driving u crazy! thank you SOOOOOOOOO much for doing this. u get one of the awards i used to give out. ummm what was it....the good dog award i think. u get a special rare version since it officially doesn't exist anymore. so that's pretty cool. lol Thanks again, ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 15, 2007 Report Share Posted September 15, 2007 DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS HORATIO!!! p.s. cool new avatar..... Thanks for the avatar compliments, but I brought this one in for Mr. Moosey. In order for him to know it is here, I have to use it. As for the hanging part... at least I did leave you hanging upside down by your toenails. I have to read it a couple more times. I am only worried if a young person reads it. Please give me one more day. Ok, since u asked so nicely! sorry if i got a little impatient.... yeah, i know it's a bit tricky to edit. hopefully it's not driving u crazy! thank you SOOOOOOOOO much for doing this. u get one of the awards i used to give out. ummm what was it....the good dog award i think. u get a special rare version since it officially doesn't exist anymore. so that's pretty cool. lol Thanks again, ~Liz I would rather not edit anything, but let me see what I can do. Of course, this is with your approval and all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 DON'T LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS HORATIO!!! p.s. cool new avatar..... Thanks for the avatar compliments, but I brought this one in for Mr. Moosey. In order for him to know it is here, I have to use it. As for the hanging part... at least I did leave you hanging upside down by your toenails. I have to read it a couple more times. I am only worried if a young person reads it. Please give me one more day. Ok, since u asked so nicely! sorry if i got a little impatient.... yeah, i know it's a bit tricky to edit. hopefully it's not driving u crazy! thank you SOOOOOOOOO much for doing this. u get one of the awards i used to give out. ummm what was it....the good dog award i think. u get a special rare version since it officially doesn't exist anymore. so that's pretty cool. lol Thanks again, ~Liz I would rather not edit anything, but let me see what I can do. Of course, this is with your approval and all. yes, with my complete approval. thank you SOOOO much! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! i am making every attempt to continue waiting patiently.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 25, 2007 Report Share Posted September 25, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! i am making every attempt to continue waiting patiently.... Please bear with me, I am overwhelmed at the moment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! i am making every attempt to continue waiting patiently.... Please bear with me, I am overwhelmed at the moment. me too, i am overwhelmed by being sick, having homework, and play practice. and being utterly exhausted all day. because im sick. and i had 3 tests today so i couldnt really miss school even though i was not in a good condition to go. and i didnt want to miss practice bcuz i already missed it yesterday due to piano lessons. I HATE BEING SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! congested-ly, Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 26, 2007 Report Share Posted September 26, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! i am making every attempt to continue waiting patiently.... Please bear with me, I am overwhelmed at the moment. me too, i am overwhelmed by being sick, having homework, and play practice. and being utterly exhausted all day. because im sick. and i had 3 tests today so i couldnt really miss school even though i was not in a good condition to go. and i didnt want to miss practice bcuz i already missed it yesterday due to piano lessons. I HATE BEING SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! congested-ly, Liz You are way more overwhelmed than me. Here's a hammie bear hug for you! *makes a pot of my best chicken noodle soup, sends flowers and creates a get well card for Liz* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2007 horatioooooooooooooooooooo! I am sorry. I have been having a bad day. My bike broke down 50 miles away from home. It is fixed now, but I promised to get it up by Monday. Please bear with me. k thanks for the update! i understand. sorry about ur bike! doesnt it get hot biking around florida? i will wait patiently now! i am making every attempt to continue waiting patiently.... Please bear with me, I am overwhelmed at the moment. me too, i am overwhelmed by being sick, having homework, and play practice. and being utterly exhausted all day. because im sick. and i had 3 tests today so i couldnt really miss school even though i was not in a good condition to go. and i didnt want to miss practice bcuz i already missed it yesterday due to piano lessons. I HATE BEING SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! congested-ly, Liz You are way more overwhelmed than me. Here's a hammie bear hug for you! *makes a pot of my best chicken noodle soup, sends flowers and creates a get well card for Liz* awww thanks, i feel better now! had a bit of a hacking cough this morning, but everthing seems to be fine now. thank goodness! my stress level seems to have gone down too...a clear head helps.... soooo....the story? if you're still overwhelmed i completely understand. i have to go now,,,thanks! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 hi horatio! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 hi horatio! Hi Liz !!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 29, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 hi horatio! Hi Liz !!! My mom got back from the big garage sale she went to in upstate NY. She got me 3 Elton John albums, "Friends" (movie soundtrack) (record) "16 Legendary Covers as sung by Elton John" (CD) and "Live In Australia" (CD) Also Beatles stuff: 4 laminated pictures, a book, and a T-shirt. I'm listening to "Friends" right now. And enjoying it! I thanked my mom many times. ~Liz p.s. how's the story coming? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 29, 2007 Report Share Posted September 29, 2007 hi horatio! Hi Liz !!! My mom got back from the big garage sale she went to in upstate NY. She got me 3 Elton John albums, "Friends" (movie soundtrack) (record) "16 Legendary Covers as sung by Elton John" (CD) and "Live In Australia" (CD) Also Beatles stuff: 4 laminated pictures, a book, and a T-shirt. I'm listening to "Friends" right now. And enjoying it! I thanked my mom many times. ~Liz p.s. how's the story coming? Sounds like your mother had a great garage sale day. I am waiting for HampsterKing's approval. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted September 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2007 hi horatio! Hi Liz !!! My mom got back from the big garage sale she went to in upstate NY. She got me 3 Elton John albums, "Friends" (movie soundtrack) (record) "16 Legendary Covers as sung by Elton John" (CD) and "Live In Australia" (CD) Also Beatles stuff: 4 laminated pictures, a book, and a T-shirt. I'm listening to "Friends" right now. And enjoying it! I thanked my mom many times. ~Liz p.s. how's the story coming? Sounds like your mother had a great garage sale day. I am waiting for HampsterKing's approval. Yes, she was walking around for seven hours! I might go next year. Thank you, ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 3, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2007 Is the story approved yet? (I am trying VERY hard not to annoy you every day about this!) ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 4, 2007 Report Share Posted October 4, 2007 Is the story approved yet? (I am trying VERY hard not to annoy you every day about this!) ~Liz HampsterKing is pretty slow. Let me get after him. He has been celebrating religious holidays, so I am assuming that is one of the reasons he is slow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2007 Is the story approved yet? (I am trying VERY hard not to annoy you every day about this!) ~Liz HampsterKing is pretty slow. Let me get after him. He has been celebrating religious holidays, so I am assuming that is one of the reasons he is slow. yeah, i was just looking around "warm wishes..." ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 ***waits (patiently)*** ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 7, 2007 Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 ***waits (patiently)*** ~Liz I appreciate your patience. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2007 ***waits (patiently)*** ~Liz I appreciate your patience. It's a virtue! LOL ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted October 8, 2007 Report Share Posted October 8, 2007 ***waits (patiently)*** ~Liz I appreciate your patience. It's a virtue! LOL ~Liz *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* WHY WON'T THEY HURRY UP AND TRANSLATE MOTHER THREE??!! ARRRRRGGGGGHH! -kills stuff- Nothing is more patient than an Earthbound fan... *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2007 ***waits (patiently)*** ~Liz I appreciate your patience. It's a virtue! LOL ~Liz *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* WHY WON'T THEY HURRY UP AND TRANSLATE MOTHER THREE??!! ARRRRRGGGGGHH! -kills stuff- Nothing is more patient than an Earthbound fan... *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The astronomy Domine*~* LOL i am being very patient waiting for my DVD of EJ's 60th birthday concert!! (i'd be counting the days if i knew what day it was supposed to come....but on the elton john message baord, people have been talking of delays & such so i have no idea when it's coming.) ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 13, 2007 Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Liz... go ahead and put your story up in a post. I tried to do it, but there are lots of little symbols when I put it in my program, so you would save me time by putting up the post for me. Thanks. Horatio Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Elton John Short Story It was September 2010, and Liz Callahan had finished unpacking her things into her Northwestern University dorm. Now it was late afternoon, and she was walking around downtown Evanston. She had on her Elton John hat and was carrying her Elton John purse. She had been in love with the man ever since she was 15. She was walking slowly, breathing in the fresh air with the faint scent of Lake Michigan, when someone appeared in the street. She stood there staring for almost a minute, not daring to breathe. It was him. It was Elton. And he was crying. She was finally able to make her legs work, and walked hesitantly over to the bench that he had collapsed on. He looked up when she got close, and took in her appearance. "A fan, are you? Listen, I'm really not in the mood to give an autograph, I'm sorry," he said shakily. "It's fine, fine..." Liz answered as she sat down beside him. "Can I...I mean, do you mind, well, what's wrong?" He sighed, then began to talk. "It's David...well, he, he's had an affair." With that, he started weeping again. "Oh no," Liz breathed. She put her arm around Elton. "How could he do something like that? To you?" "I don't know. It was probably my fault. I'm old and, well, I don't see how anyone could even love me in the first place," he said sadly. "I do!" Liz said fiercely. He gave a weak smile as he looked at her again. "Well, that's one for me then, I suppose..." he said. She took his hand, and he did not object. She began caressing it with her own. For a few minutes, they stayed like that, lost in each other's eyes. Then Elton stood up suddenly. "Have you ever been to France, er, oh dear. I don't even know your name yet," he said. "Liz, Liz Callahan," she said. "And no, I haven't been to France. Why?" She wouldn't even let herself dare to think what he might be suggesting. "Well, I don't know if you know this, but I've got a home there, in Nice. Would you like to accompany me there?" he asked. "God knows there isn't anyone else, now." "I'd love to!" she said, almost before he had finished asking her. "How are we getting there?" "Oh, I've got a jet. We'll drive to it. Come on, I'll take you to where I parked," he said. He offered his hand to help her up, and they didn't let go as they walked along the streets of Evanston. When they had reached an extravagant hotel at the outskirts of town, he handed the attendant his valet ticket, and soon his fancy car was driven up. "Hop in," he said, opening the front left door for her. After she had gotten in, he closed the door and walked around to the driver's side, which was on the right. "You've got the steering wheel on the other side!" she said happily, after he had gotten in himself. He nodded. "It makes me feel at home," he said as he pulled out of the parking lot. Liz marveled at the elaborate interior of the car. After a half-hour's ride, they arrived at a remote airport. Elton parked, and they walked over to a large airplane. "This is yours?" she gasped. "Only the best," he said with a smile. They walked up the staircase into the spacious plane. It looked like an elegant, expensive living room. The were several plush sofas, a large stereo, and, of course, a grand piano, bolted to the floor. "This is amazing!" she said. "It's always nice to have someone appreciate this. A new perspective," Elton said. "Could you...I mean, if you don't want to, that's fine, but could you play a little?" Liz said, gesturing towards the piano. "Of course," he said, "We just have to wait until after takeoff; regulations, you know." She nodded, and sank into one of the cream-colored couches. Elton sat next to her. They started another conversation as the plane took off. Liz was in heaven. Here she was, talking to her idol, the love of her life. The ride passed like a dream. A private concert, laughing, and talking. A few hours in, Elton suggested that she rest a bit so that she would be awake when they got to France. She took her shoes off and laid down on the long couch that he was sitting on, her head a few inches from him. Once she had fallen asleep, Elton moved over and gently picked up her head so it rested on his lap. He began stroking her hair, then fell asleep himself after a few minutes. * * * When they both woke up, land was visible out the window. "Is that France?" Liz asked with wonder in her voice. "Yes, it isn't much longer now," Elton said. She looked into his warm, brown eyes, and found herself melting. 15 minutes later, the plane was angling down. "Welcome to Nice," he said with a smile, "One of my favorite places to spend time - especially with someone as sweet as you." She had to pinch herself to make sure this wasn't all a dream. It hurt, and she smiled all the more. She floated down to the car that was waiting at the terminal, and Elton drove them to a magnificent home. Liz was speechless when she saw it. "Come in," Elton said, and the two held hands again as they walked into the breathtaking foyer. "We'll go in here first." He led her to a sun-dappled room with a tall wine rack. "I thought, well, that you didn't drink anymore," Liz said hesitantly. "Every so often, I need to," he said with a sigh. "This is one of those times." He looked around for a minute, then selected a large bottle of white wine and two glasses. "I'm only 18," Liz said, "In the US, you need to be 21..." She trailed off. "You're not in America anymore, sweetheart," Elton said, "And you look like you need a bit of a drink too." He poured the wine into the two glasses, almost filling them. "To us!" he said, and they clinked glasses. Liz took her first sip. She didn't like the taste at first, but with each consecutive gulp, it grew on her. After what seemed like no time at all, she was ready for her second glass. The second turned to a third, and soon, they had finished off the entire bottle. The room was swaying. Liz found it hard to focus on anything. She noticed Elton and smiled. "Hi, El-, Elt-, Elton...I lll...llove you!" she slurred. The world was so bright! She felt like dancing. Elton smiled back. "Well I th-think you're buh-beautifulll!" he replied. "Come on upshtairsss." She was only too happy to oblige. She would have gone anywhere with him. They stumbled over to the elevator, where it took Elton several tries to press the "up" button. As soon as the doors closed, they were all over each other, clinging tightly together and kissing with all their strength. Neither of them noticed when the elevator reached the bedroom. The doors slid shut again, and they continued as the elevator stood still. Finally, they broke apart. Liz fumbled for the "open doors" button, and they staggered into the lavish bedroom. They made their way over to the bed, where Elton pulled down the covers. Her hands worked their way around his body and eventually pulled his shirt off. They fell down into the bed as he took hers off, leaving her with only a camisole. Shirts led to pants, and eventually they were both completely free of clothing. They gazed into each other's eyes again; intoxicated not only by the wine, but by love. * * * The sunrise crept in through the huge bay windows and crossed Liz's face. She was disoriented for a moment, then remembered where she was and what had happened. She sat up, and felt pain slice through her head. "Guess this is a hangover," she thought, and winced. Shading her eyes from the sunlight, she looked over to Elton. He was just waking up as well. He groaned, rubbed his head, and smiled at her. She smiled nervously back. "Here, I'll make some coffee," he said, "Best cure, so I've found." She nodded, and lay back down. Thoughts raced through her head, so fast she couldn't concentrate on a single one. Elton left for a few minutes, and then came back with two fresh cups of coffee, their pungent smell finding its way into Liz's nose. "Here, drink this," he said. She took the cup and sipped the steaming beverage slowly. The strong taste soothed her head, and she was able to speak. "I...last night probably shouldn't have happened. I mean, it's not that I didn't enjoy myself, it's just..." she trailed off and looked at Elton, her eyes filled with concern, his with care. He patted her arm. "It's fine. If you want, no one will ever find out what happened. This home is very secluded; no one will find us here. Don't worry about anything. I can have you flown back, if you want," he said. "Or, if you want to stay, I'd love to have you." Liz sighed. "My classes don't start for another week. I had just gone early to get accustomed to the school. I guess a few more days wouldn't hurt," she said. "If...well, if you're sure you really want me here." His wide smile told her the answer. "I'd have you stay here with me every day," he said. "You're the best thing that's happened to me in a long time." He set down his cup, and Liz did the same. The next minute, they were kissing again, a soft, slow, gentle kiss that made Liz feel at peace with herself. How could she have had any cares? She was alone with Elton John, and he loved her. Life was perfect. * * * The days following seemed to last forever. The two were perfectly content with each other's company, and never seemed to tire. Liz's first day of classes came and went, without her giving it a second thought. Her purse had been discarded on the wine room floor, with voicemail messages piling up on her phone without her notice. Every so often, a knock would come at the front door, but these went unnoticed, and the deadbolts were secure. Magazines and newspapers reported on the mysterious disappearance of the star. None of these events penetrated the close-knit bond between the enchanted lovers. Time had stopped, and nothing could release them from the spell of their abundant love for each other. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2007 Hopefully that worked...anyone can ask me any questions they might have. and I am open to comments & constructive criticism!! Enjoy, ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 14, 2007 Report Share Posted October 14, 2007 Hopefully that worked...anyone can ask me any questions they might have. and I am open to comments & constructive criticism!! Enjoy, ~Liz Fantastic story and very well written!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 17, 2007 Report Share Posted October 17, 2007 Elton John Short Story It was September 2010, and Liz Callahan had finished unpacking her things into her Northwestern University dorm. Now it was late afternoon, and she was walking around downtown Evanston. She had on her Elton John hat and was carrying her Elton John purse. She had been in love with the man ever since she was 15. She was walking slowly, breathing in the fresh air with the faint scent of Lake Michigan, when someone appeared in the street. She stood there staring for almost a minute, not daring to breathe. It was him. It was Elton. And he was crying. She was finally able to make her legs work, and walked hesitantly over to the bench that he had collapsed on. He looked up when she got close, and took in her appearance. "A fan, are you? Listen, I'm really not in the mood to give an autograph, I'm sorry," he said shakily. "It's fine, fine..." Liz answered as she sat down beside him. "Can I...I mean, do you mind, well, what's wrong?" He sighed, then began to talk. "It's David...well, he, he's had an affair." With that, he started weeping again. "Oh no," Liz breathed. She put her arm around Elton. "How could he do something like that? To you?" "I don't know. It was probably my fault. I'm old and, well, I don't see how anyone could even love me in the first place," he said sadly. "I do!" Liz said fiercely. He gave a weak smile as he looked at her again. "Well, that's one for me then, I suppose..." he said. She took his hand, and he did not object. She began caressing it with her own. For a few minutes, they stayed like that, lost in each other's eyes. Then Elton stood up suddenly. "Have you ever been to France, er, oh dear. I don't even know your name yet," he said. "Liz, Liz Callahan," she said. "And no, I haven't been to France. Why?" She wouldn't even let herself dare to think what he might be suggesting. "Well, I don't know if you know this, but I've got a home there, in Nice. Would you like to accompany me there?" he asked. "God knows there isn't anyone else, now." "I'd love to!" she said, almost before he had finished asking her. "How are we getting there?" "Oh, I've got a jet. We'll drive to it. Come on, I'll take you to where I parked," he said. He offered his hand to help her up, and they didn't let go as they walked along the streets of Evanston. When they had reached an extravagant hotel at the outskirts of town, he handed the attendant his valet ticket, and soon his fancy car was driven up. "Hop in," he said, opening the front left door for her. After she had gotten in, he closed the door and walked around to the driver's side, which was on the right. "You've got the steering wheel on the other side!" she said happily, after he had gotten in himself. He nodded. "It makes me feel at home," he said as he pulled out of the parking lot. Liz marveled at the elaborate interior of the car. After a half-hour's ride, they arrived at a remote airport. Elton parked, and they walked over to a large airplane. "This is yours?" she gasped. "Only the best," he said with a smile. They walked up the staircase into the spacious plane. It looked like an elegant, expensive living room. The were several plush sofas, a large stereo, and, of course, a grand piano, bolted to the floor. "This is amazing!" she said. "It's always nice to have someone appreciate this. A new perspective," Elton said. "Could you...I mean, if you don't want to, that's fine, but could you play a little?" Liz said, gesturing towards the piano. "Of course," he said, "We just have to wait until after takeoff; regulations, you know." She nodded, and sank into one of the cream-colored couches. Elton sat next to her. They started another conversation as the plane took off. Liz was in heaven. Here she was, talking to her idol, the love of her life. The ride passed like a dream. A private concert, laughing, and talking. A few hours in, Elton suggested that she rest a bit so that she would be awake when they got to France. She took her shoes off and laid down on the long couch that he was sitting on, her head a few inches from him. Once she had fallen asleep, Elton moved over and gently picked up her head so it rested on his lap. He began stroking her hair, then fell asleep himself after a few minutes. * * * When they both woke up, land was visible out the window. "Is that France?" Liz asked with wonder in her voice. "Yes, it isn't much longer now," Elton said. She looked into his warm, brown eyes, and found herself melting. 15 minutes later, the plane was angling down. "Welcome to Nice," he said with a smile, "One of my favorite places to spend time - especially with someone as sweet as you." She had to pinch herself to make sure this wasn't all a dream. It hurt, and she smiled all the more. She floated down to the car that was waiting at the terminal, and Elton drove them to a magnificent home. Liz was speechless when she saw it. "Come in," Elton said, and the two held hands again as they walked into the breathtaking foyer. "We'll go in here first." He led her to a sun-dappled room with a tall wine rack. "I thought, well, that you didn't drink anymore," Liz said hesitantly. "Every so often, I need to," he said with a sigh. "This is one of those times." He looked around for a minute, then selected a large bottle of white wine and two glasses. "I'm only 18," Liz said, "In the US, you need to be 21..." She trailed off. "You're not in America anymore, sweetheart," Elton said, "And you look like you need a bit of a drink too." He poured the wine into the two glasses, almost filling them. "To us!" he said, and they clinked glasses. Liz took her first sip. She didn't like the taste at first, but with each consecutive gulp, it grew on her. After what seemed like no time at all, she was ready for her second glass. The second turned to a third, and soon, they had finished off the entire bottle. The room was swaying. Liz found it hard to focus on anything. She noticed Elton and smiled. "Hi, El-, Elt-, Elton...I lll...llove you!" she slurred. The world was so bright! She felt like dancing. Elton smiled back. "Well I th-think you're buh-beautifulll!" he replied. "Come on upshtairsss." She was only too happy to oblige. She would have gone anywhere with him. They stumbled over to the elevator, where it took Elton several tries to press the "up" button. As soon as the doors closed, they were all over each other, clinging tightly together and kissing with all their strength. Neither of them noticed when the elevator reached the bedroom. The doors slid shut again, and they continued as the elevator stood still. Finally, they broke apart. Liz fumbled for the "open doors" button, and they staggered into the lavish bedroom. They made their way over to the bed, where Elton pulled down the covers. Her hands worked their way around his body and eventually pulled his shirt off. They fell down into the bed as he took hers off, leaving her with only a camisole. Shirts led to pants, and eventually they were both completely free of clothing. They gazed into each other's eyes again; intoxicated not only by the wine, but by love. * * * The sunrise crept in through the huge bay windows and crossed Liz's face. She was disoriented for a moment, then remembered where she was and what had happened. She sat up, and felt pain slice through her head. "Guess this is a hangover," she thought, and winced. Shading her eyes from the sunlight, she looked over to Elton. He was just waking up as well. He groaned, rubbed his head, and smiled at her. She smiled nervously back. "Here, I'll make some coffee," he said, "Best cure, so I've found." She nodded, and lay back down. Thoughts raced through her head, so fast she couldn't concentrate on a single one. Elton left for a few minutes, and then came back with two fresh cups of coffee, their pungent smell finding its way into Liz's nose. "Here, drink this," he said. She took the cup and sipped the steaming beverage slowly. The strong taste soothed her head, and she was able to speak. "I...last night probably shouldn't have happened. I mean, it's not that I didn't enjoy myself, it's just..." she trailed off and looked at Elton, her eyes filled with concern, his with care. He patted her arm. "It's fine. If you want, no one will ever find out what happened. This home is very secluded; no one will find us here. Don't worry about anything. I can have you flown back, if you want," he said. "Or, if you want to stay, I'd love to have you." Liz sighed. "My classes don't start for another week. I had just gone early to get accustomed to the school. I guess a few more days wouldn't hurt," she said. "If...well, if you're sure you really want me here." His wide smile told her the answer. "I'd have you stay here with me every day," he said. "You're the best thing that's happened to me in a long time." He set down his cup, and Liz did the same. The next minute, they were kissing again, a soft, slow, gentle kiss that made Liz feel at peace with herself. How could she have had any cares? She was alone with Elton John, and he loved her. Life was perfect. * * * The days following seemed to last forever. The two were perfectly content with each other's company, and never seemed to tire. Liz's first day of classes came and went, without her giving it a second thought. Her purse had been discarded on the wine room floor, with voicemail messages piling up on her phone without her notice. Every so often, a knock would come at the front door, but these went unnoticed, and the deadbolts were secure. Magazines and newspapers reported on the mysterious disappearance of the star. None of these events penetrated the close-knit bond between the enchanted lovers. Time had stopped, and nothing could release them from the spell of their abundant love for each other. This is such a great story! Where is everyone? They should be reading it!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 Elton John Short Story It was September 2010, and Liz Callahan had finished unpacking her things into her Northwestern University dorm. Now it was late afternoon, and she was walking around downtown Evanston. She had on her Elton John hat and was carrying her Elton John purse. She had been in love with the man ever since she was 15. She was walking slowly, breathing in the fresh air with the faint scent of Lake Michigan, when someone appeared in the street. She stood there staring for almost a minute, not daring to breathe. It was him. It was Elton. And he was crying. She was finally able to make her legs work, and walked hesitantly over to the bench that he had collapsed on. He looked up when she got close, and took in her appearance. "A fan, are you? Listen, I'm really not in the mood to give an autograph, I'm sorry," he said shakily. "It's fine, fine..." Liz answered as she sat down beside him. "Can I...I mean, do you mind, well, what's wrong?" He sighed, then began to talk. "It's David...well, he, he's had an affair." With that, he started weeping again. "Oh no," Liz breathed. She put her arm around Elton. "How could he do something like that? To you?" "I don't know. It was probably my fault. I'm old and, well, I don't see how anyone could even love me in the first place," he said sadly. "I do!" Liz said fiercely. He gave a weak smile as he looked at her again. "Well, that's one for me then, I suppose..." he said. She took his hand, and he did not object. She began caressing it with her own. For a few minutes, they stayed like that, lost in each other's eyes. Then Elton stood up suddenly. "Have you ever been to France, er, oh dear. I don't even know your name yet," he said. "Liz, Liz Callahan," she said. "And no, I haven't been to France. Why?" She wouldn't even let herself dare to think what he might be suggesting. "Well, I don't know if you know this, but I've got a home there, in Nice. Would you like to accompany me there?" he asked. "God knows there isn't anyone else, now." "I'd love to!" she said, almost before he had finished asking her. "How are we getting there?" "Oh, I've got a jet. We'll drive to it. Come on, I'll take you to where I parked," he said. He offered his hand to help her up, and they didn't let go as they walked along the streets of Evanston. When they had reached an extravagant hotel at the outskirts of town, he handed the attendant his valet ticket, and soon his fancy car was driven up. "Hop in," he said, opening the front left door for her. After she had gotten in, he closed the door and walked around to the driver's side, which was on the right. "You've got the steering wheel on the other side!" she said happily, after he had gotten in himself. He nodded. "It makes me feel at home," he said as he pulled out of the parking lot. Liz marveled at the elaborate interior of the car. After a half-hour's ride, they arrived at a remote airport. Elton parked, and they walked over to a large airplane. "This is yours?" she gasped. "Only the best," he said with a smile. They walked up the staircase into the spacious plane. It looked like an elegant, expensive living room. The were several plush sofas, a large stereo, and, of course, a grand piano, bolted to the floor. "This is amazing!" she said. "It's always nice to have someone appreciate this. A new perspective," Elton said. "Could you...I mean, if you don't want to, that's fine, but could you play a little?" Liz said, gesturing towards the piano. "Of course," he said, "We just have to wait until after takeoff; regulations, you know." She nodded, and sank into one of the cream-colored couches. Elton sat next to her. They started another conversation as the plane took off. Liz was in heaven. Here she was, talking to her idol, the love of her life. The ride passed like a dream. A private concert, laughing, and talking. A few hours in, Elton suggested that she rest a bit so that she would be awake when they got to France. She took her shoes off and laid down on the long couch that he was sitting on, her head a few inches from him. Once she had fallen asleep, Elton moved over and gently picked up her head so it rested on his lap. He began stroking her hair, then fell asleep himself after a few minutes. * * * When they both woke up, land was visible out the window. "Is that France?" Liz asked with wonder in her voice. "Yes, it isn't much longer now," Elton said. She looked into his warm, brown eyes, and found herself melting. 15 minutes later, the plane was angling down. "Welcome to Nice," he said with a smile, "One of my favorite places to spend time - especially with someone as sweet as you." She had to pinch herself to make sure this wasn't all a dream. It hurt, and she smiled all the more. She floated down to the car that was waiting at the terminal, and Elton drove them to a magnificent home. Liz was speechless when she saw it. "Come in," Elton said, and the two held hands again as they walked into the breathtaking foyer. "We'll go in here first." He led her to a sun-dappled room with a tall wine rack. "I thought, well, that you didn't drink anymore," Liz said hesitantly. "Every so often, I need to," he said with a sigh. "This is one of those times." He looked around for a minute, then selected a large bottle of white wine and two glasses. "I'm only 18," Liz said, "In the US, you need to be 21..." She trailed off. "You're not in America anymore, sweetheart," Elton said, "And you look like you need a bit of a drink too." He poured the wine into the two glasses, almost filling them. "To us!" he said, and they clinked glasses. Liz took her first sip. She didn't like the taste at first, but with each consecutive gulp, it grew on her. After what seemed like no time at all, she was ready for her second glass. The second turned to a third, and soon, they had finished off the entire bottle. The room was swaying. Liz found it hard to focus on anything. She noticed Elton and smiled. "Hi, El-, Elt-, Elton...I lll...llove you!" she slurred. The world was so bright! She felt like dancing. Elton smiled back. "Well I th-think you're buh-beautifulll!" he replied. "Come on upshtairsss." She was only too happy to oblige. She would have gone anywhere with him. They stumbled over to the elevator, where it took Elton several tries to press the "up" button. As soon as the doors closed, they were all over each other, clinging tightly together and kissing with all their strength. Neither of them noticed when the elevator reached the bedroom. The doors slid shut again, and they continued as the elevator stood still. Finally, they broke apart. Liz fumbled for the "open doors" button, and they staggered into the lavish bedroom. They made their way over to the bed, where Elton pulled down the covers. Her hands worked their way around his body and eventually pulled his shirt off. They fell down into the bed as he took hers off, leaving her with only a camisole. Shirts led to pants, and eventually they were both completely free of clothing. They gazed into each other's eyes again; intoxicated not only by the wine, but by love. * * * The sunrise crept in through the huge bay windows and crossed Liz's face. She was disoriented for a moment, then remembered where she was and what had happened. She sat up, and felt pain slice through her head. "Guess this is a hangover," she thought, and winced. Shading her eyes from the sunlight, she looked over to Elton. He was just waking up as well. He groaned, rubbed his head, and smiled at her. She smiled nervously back. "Here, I'll make some coffee," he said, "Best cure, so I've found." She nodded, and lay back down. Thoughts raced through her head, so fast she couldn't concentrate on a single one. Elton left for a few minutes, and then came back with two fresh cups of coffee, their pungent smell finding its way into Liz's nose. "Here, drink this," he said. She took the cup and sipped the steaming beverage slowly. The strong taste soothed her head, and she was able to speak. "I...last night probably shouldn't have happened. I mean, it's not that I didn't enjoy myself, it's just..." she trailed off and looked at Elton, her eyes filled with concern, his with care. He patted her arm. "It's fine. If you want, no one will ever find out what happened. This home is very secluded; no one will find us here. Don't worry about anything. I can have you flown back, if you want," he said. "Or, if you want to stay, I'd love to have you." Liz sighed. "My classes don't start for another week. I had just gone early to get accustomed to the school. I guess a few more days wouldn't hurt," she said. "If...well, if you're sure you really want me here." His wide smile told her the answer. "I'd have you stay here with me every day," he said. "You're the best thing that's happened to me in a long time." He set down his cup, and Liz did the same. The next minute, they were kissing again, a soft, slow, gentle kiss that made Liz feel at peace with herself. How could she have had any cares? She was alone with Elton John, and he loved her. Life was perfect. * * * The days following seemed to last forever. The two were perfectly content with each other's company, and never seemed to tire. Liz's first day of classes came and went, without her giving it a second thought. Her purse had been discarded on the wine room floor, with voicemail messages piling up on her phone without her notice. Every so often, a knock would come at the front door, but these went unnoticed, and the deadbolts were secure. Magazines and newspapers reported on the mysterious disappearance of the star. None of these events penetrated the close-knit bond between the enchanted lovers. Time had stopped, and nothing could release them from the spell of their abundant love for each other. This is such a great story! Where is everyone? They should be reading it!!!!!!!!!! I will spread the word now! Thank you for everything. I can't believe all of it got approved! This is cool. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesse Posted October 18, 2007 Report Share Posted October 18, 2007 I've read it. It is interesting so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 20, 2007 I've read it. It is interesting so far. thank you! i couldnt think of a ending so this is all there is...didnt want to spoil the mood! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2007 So how does everyone else like it? I am open to constructive criticism, opinions wither way would be accepted. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 JUST SAY SOMETHING, FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!!! I don't care if you think if the worst thing you've ever read...just give me some feedback, those of you who haven't already!!!!!!! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The final Cut*~*] hThis inspires me to write a similer story...right now, in fact... Good job, btw. *~*The psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I think your story is wonderful!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoops Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Pretty cute, but only if in saying so it does not make me less macho. You're a good writer, DL. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Pretty cute, but only if in saying so it does not make me less macho. You're a good writer, DL. *starts singing the "Macho, Macho Hoops" song* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoops Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Pretty cute, but only if in saying so it does not make me less macho. You're a good writer, DL. *starts singing the "Macho, Macho Hoops" song* That is an amazing song. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Pretty cute, but only if in saying so it does not make me less macho. You're a good writer, DL. *starts singing the "Macho, Macho Hoops" song* That is an amazing song. xD I thought you would enjoy hearing it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
- Kat - Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I think it was well-written, and it was obvious you put a lot of effort into it. Admittedly, fanfictions involving real people aren't my cup of tea, but that's me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The final Cut*~*] hThis inspires me to write a similer story...right now, in fact... Good job, btw. *~*The psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy domine*~* Thank you! just let me know and i will read your story once it's finished. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Pretty cute, but only if in saying so it does not make me less macho. You're a good writer, DL. Thank you, too! (And no, this does not make you less macho!) ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I've read it. It is interesting so far. Thanks to you too, Jesse. (Hopefully people are enjoying my time-consuming thank yous!) ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 I think your story is wonderful!!! And thanks to you, too, of course, Horatio. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted October 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 I think it was well-written, and it was obvious you put a lot of effort into it. Admittedly, fanfictions involving real people aren't my cup of tea, but that's me. Amazingly, it came pretty fully-formed into my head when i woke up in the middle of that night when it came to me...all i had to do was "flesh it out." i have tried writing a few things before in my life, but this one came the most naturally. and due to other commitments, i couldnt get to type it up for most of that day. so i was going over the whole thing in my mind that day, making sure i wouldnt forget! that's OK if it's not your cup of tea. everyone likes different things! thanks for your comments, ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mega Wolf Posted October 29, 2007 Report Share Posted October 29, 2007 It was a great story. However, imagining Elton John with my vivid imagination was not the most pleasing thing to me. Don't get me wrong, Elton John is a great artist. It's just personal preference that he stays out of my imaginings. That was really good writing, though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 4, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 It was a great story. However, imagining Elton John with my vivid imagination was not the most pleasing thing to me. Don't get me wrong, Elton John is a great artist. It's just personal preference that he stays out of my imaginings. That was really good writing, though. thank you! i will make sure that he stays fully in my imaginings and out of yours. thanks again, ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 4, 2007 Report Share Posted November 4, 2007 It was a great story. However, imagining Elton John with my vivid imagination was not the most pleasing thing to me. Don't get me wrong, Elton John is a great artist. It's just personal preference that he stays out of my imaginings. That was really good writing, though. thank you! i will make sure that he stays fully in my imaginings and out of yours. thanks again, ~Liz How you could solve this is by changing the names to protect the innocent. You would then know who the characters really are, but we would not know. How does this sound? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2007 It was a great story. However, imagining Elton John with my vivid imagination was not the most pleasing thing to me. Don't get me wrong, Elton John is a great artist. It's just personal preference that he stays out of my imaginings. That was really good writing, though. thank you! i will make sure that he stays fully in my imaginings and out of yours. thanks again, ~Liz How you could solve this is by changing the names to protect the innocent. You would then know who the characters really are, but we would not know. How does this sound? if i get more complaints maybe... but i dont wanna change it! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 21, 2007 Report Share Posted November 21, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz *hands Liz The Platinum Moon Award for her story writing* Here you go! Congratulations!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz *hands Liz The Platinum Moon Award for her story writing* Here you go! Congratulations!!! Cool! Thanks! And BTW... I actually didnt know what it looked like 'til now! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 25, 2007 Report Share Posted November 25, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz *hands Liz The Platinum Moon Award for her story writing* Here you go! Congratulations!!! Cool! Thanks! And BTW... I actually didnt know what it looked like 'til now! ~Liz Magnificent!!!!! WOW!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted November 27, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz *hands Liz The Platinum Moon Award for her story writing* Here you go! Congratulations!!! Cool! Thanks! And BTW... I actually didnt know what it looked like 'til now! ~Liz Magnificent!!!!! WOW!!! i know! i <3 it! awesomee pool ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted November 27, 2007 Report Share Posted November 27, 2007 I took the plunge and posted the story on the Elton John website message board...So far responses have been good! (With the occasional need for the reader to "stick their head in the freezer!" LOL ~LIz I told you it was good!!!! thanks! i am rather satisfied with it... ~Liz *hands Liz The Platinum Moon Award for her story writing* Here you go! Congratulations!!! Cool! Thanks! And BTW... I actually didnt know what it looked like 'til now! ~Liz Magnificent!!!!! WOW!!! i know! i awesomee pool ~Liz Exactly what I was thinking. LOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 1, 2007 Report Share Posted December 1, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you not that im trying very hard for it to die. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you not that im trying very hard for it to die. ~Liz The problem is that every year at this time, the board slows down to almost a standstill. I always am sad when the board slows down so much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you not that im trying very hard for it to die. ~Liz The problem is that every year at this time, the board slows down to almost a standstill. I always am sad when the board slows down so much. yeah i havent been on in a few days...gasp.. im going to go start a john lennon topic ttyl ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you not that im trying very hard for it to die. ~Liz The problem is that every year at this time, the board slows down to almost a standstill. I always am sad when the board slows down so much. yeah i havent been on in a few days...gasp.. im going to go start a john lennon topic ttyl ~Liz Mushroom_king will love that topic! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 sooooooooo just thought id nudge this topic again... ~Liz Nudge is good. But as hard as I try Still my will not die from "Shine on through" album: a single man gary osborne wrote the lyrics, not bernie. ~Liz shine on through Oh my love I have cursed the stars above That lead my heart to you But as hard as I try Still my love will not die And the stars still shine on through And the stars still shine on through Oh my dear Now this ship's too hard to steer The tide has turned, turned on you I have been through the lies That I've seen in your eyes But the truth still shines on through But the truth it still shines, shines on through So shine, shine on through the days we have to fill Though we took our love so daringly And gave it up uncaringly There are feelings left not even we can kill Oh my friend So at last we reach the end The lights go down on cue I have wasted my time But it tasted oh so fine That my love still shines, shines on through And my love still shines, shines on you not that im trying very hard for it to die. ~Liz The problem is that every year at this time, the board slows down to almost a standstill. I always am sad when the board slows down so much. yeah i havent been on in a few days...gasp.. im going to go start a john lennon topic ttyl ~Liz Mushroom_king will love that topic! ive posted it..ur turn, go mod it! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Modded and I will move it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Modded and I will move it. thanx sometimes im a bit scatterbrained! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Modded and I will move it. thanx sometimes im a bit scatterbrained! ~Liz No problem. I surpass you in the scatterbrained department! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 12, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Modded and I will move it. thanx sometimes im a bit scatterbrained! ~Liz No problem. I surpass you in the scatterbrained department! LOL we are both blonde too... ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 13, 2007 Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 oops if i put it stories please put it in music/lyrics! thanx ~Liz Modded and I will move it. thanx sometimes im a bit scatterbrained! ~Liz No problem. I surpass you in the scatterbrained department! LOL we are both blonde too... ~Liz Exactly!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 22, 2007 Report Share Posted December 22, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. well im having fun i just happen to be here too... listening to elton stuff on youtube...one user, that i know from the elton john forum, has a lot of good & rare songs (just audio) ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. well im having fun i just happen to be here too... listening to elton stuff on youtube...one user, that i know from the elton john forum, has a lot of good & rare songs (just audio) ~Liz A great combination... rare and good! Thanks!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 23, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. well im having fun i just happen to be here too... listening to elton stuff on youtube...one user, that i know from the elton john forum, has a lot of good & rare songs (just audio) ~Liz A great combination... rare and good! Thanks!!! yep! im listening to "tonight" (live rainbow theatre 1977), very pretty song ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 23, 2007 Report Share Posted December 23, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. well im having fun i just happen to be here too... listening to elton stuff on youtube...one user, that i know from the elton john forum, has a lot of good & rare songs (just audio) ~Liz A great combination... rare and good! Thanks!!! yep! im listening to "tonight" (live rainbow theatre 1977), very pretty song ~Liz Wish I was there listening with you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 Wake up, Hampsterdance!!! This board gets really slow sometimes... :closedeyes: ~Liz Especially around the holidays when everyone is away having fun. well im having fun i just happen to be here too... listening to elton stuff on youtube...one user, that i know from the elton john forum, has a lot of good & rare songs (just audio) ~Liz A great combination... rare and good! Thanks!!! yep! im listening to "tonight" (live rainbow theatre 1977), very pretty song ~Liz Wish I was there listening with you. aw thanks! u can listen to it yourself and pretend im there... ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yay ur on at the same time i am horatio! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yay ur on at the same time i am horatio! ~Liz Great link!!! Thanks!!! I wish I could post it as it is really great. Thank you sooooooooo much!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted December 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yay ur on at the same time i am horatio! ~Liz Great link!!! Thanks!!! I wish I could post it as it is really great. Thank you sooooooooo much!!! just say search youtube for "Elton John - Tonight (Live Rainbow Theatre 1977)" and it's the only result. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted December 24, 2007 Report Share Posted December 24, 2007 yay ur on at the same time i am horatio! ~Liz Great link!!! Thanks!!! I wish I could post it as it is really great. Thank you sooooooooo much!!! just say search youtube for "Elton John - Tonight (Live Rainbow Theatre 1977)" and it's the only result. ~Liz Yeah!!!! Thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted January 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2008 I have to make sure this topic stays active... For my own benefit if no one else's. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted January 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 25, 2008 Report Share Posted January 25, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted January 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 28, 2008 Report Share Posted January 28, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted February 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 1, 2008 Report Share Posted February 1, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz But you are soooooooooooo good at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted February 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz But you are soooooooooooo good at it! well i'll just have to wait for another waking dream/vision cos thats how this one came to me... ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 3, 2008 Report Share Posted February 3, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz But you are soooooooooooo good at it! well i'll just have to wait for another waking dream/vision cos thats how this one came to me... ~Liz *holds a shiny object in front of Liz, with it going back and forth like a pendulum* You are getting sleepy. Very, very sleepy. You are almost asleep. At the count of three you will be totally asleep. One... two... three. Now Liz, you will follow my directions exactly. You will be creating your next romance novel... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dog lover Posted February 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz But you are soooooooooooo good at it! well i'll just have to wait for another waking dream/vision cos thats how this one came to me... ~Liz *holds a shiny object in front of Liz, with it going back and forth like a pendulum* You are getting sleepy. Very, very sleepy. You are almost asleep. At the count of three you will be totally asleep. One... two... three. Now Liz, you will follow my directions exactly. You will be creating your next romance novel... LOL!!! ~Liz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 4, 2008 Report Share Posted February 4, 2008 ***whistles as she watches the dying topic*** stay with me elton!!!!! ~Liz You could always write another story, or continue with Part Two of the first one. well i was fantasizing a bit when i had time left over after my english midterm...but nothing concrete. just more hormones acting up. ~Liz I would have you think of the millions and millions of dollars that are made with romance novels. There are lots of people who enjoy reading these fantasies because it helps them escape for a period of time from the hum-drum of everyday life. So, keep those thoughts, you might make millions as a romance writer. haha even if i did do well i dont know if id want to be known as a romance novel writer...i ususally laugh/scoff when i see those kind of books. i think this was just a fluke...maybe ill try writing other stuff. ~Liz LOL LOL But you are soooooooooooo good at it! well i'll just have to wait for another waking dream/vision cos thats how this one came to me... ~Liz *holds a shiny object in front of Liz, with it going back and forth like a pendulum* You are getting sleepy. Very, very sleepy. You are almost asleep. At the count of three you will be totally asleep. One... two... three. Now Liz, you will follow my directions exactly. You will be creating your next romance novel... LOL!!! ~Liz *realizes Liz is under the spell and waits for the first installment* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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