xMyOwnMindx Posted April 27, 2007 Report Share Posted April 27, 2007 wheres the time gone where have my friends gone where did the money go wheres the love where are my hopes and dreams why can i throw this away isnt anything sacred anymore doesnt feel like theres much of anything anymore when it all feels like theres nothing left and everyday your pushing to keep the tears back to keep your head up slowly falling apart you know the diseases are eating away at your heart soul and brain each passing moment drains you and every fake smile is documented for a later laugh at life small regrets tear at your memories ripping apart the love that felt like was there there was once happiness now replaced with the need lonely hearts will bleed alone but everyone feels the same we all just wanna break free so ill take a walk at night to clear my mind with each step im writing poems in my head she says we love you we care were trying to help i get it i see i reply thanks i know but i hate everything. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted April 27, 2007 Report Share Posted April 27, 2007 wheres the time gone where have my friends gone where did the money go wheres the love where are my hopes and dreams why can i throw this away isnt anything sacred anymore doesnt feel like theres much of anything anymore when it all feels like theres nothing left and everyday your pushing to keep the tears back to keep your head up slowly falling apart you know the diseases are eating away at your heart soul and brain each passing moment drains you and every fake smile is documented for a later laugh at life small regrets tear at your memories ripping apart the love that felt like was there there was once happiness now replaced with the need lonely hearts will bleed alone but everyone feels the same we all just wanna break free so ill take a walk at night to clear my mind with each step im writing poems in my head she says we love you we care were trying to help i get it i see i reply thanks i know but i hate everything. *is at a total loss for words* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted April 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 por quwa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted April 28, 2007 Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 por quwa Because there is so much feeling in there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted April 28, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2007 por quwa Because there is so much feeling in there. life is feeling Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted April 30, 2007 Report Share Posted April 30, 2007 por quwa Because there is so much feeling in there. life is feeling yay someone gets it very powerful poem, Lauren, very strong. You're really good at evoking emotional images. and you're right Life is feeling. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted May 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2007 por quwa Because there is so much feeling in there. life is feeling yay someone gets it very powerful poem, Lauren, very strong. You're really good at evoking emotional images. and you're right Life is feeling. i dont really want life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted May 7, 2007 Report Share Posted May 7, 2007 por quwa Because there is so much feeling in there. life is feeling yay someone gets it very powerful poem, Lauren, very strong. You're really good at evoking emotional images. and you're right Life is feeling. i dont really want life. but life is good for you! if you have no life, you're like a little glass figurine that broke and was hastily repaired with duct tape. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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