xMyOwnMindx Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 the biggest difference in my writing is weather i write it here while i type it or i copy it from a diary/notebook. this poem was written last night. maybe around 11. not sure. take it how you will. respond with words please. ---------------------------------------------------------- he beat me like the piece of worthless crud that i am i wanna hear noise i dont even want music i cant feel a bone in my left hand i really hate you all with my dad's blood dripped on my face and halfpurged oatmeal in my breathing passages i wish we hadnt stopped the pain is tears but i love to get the anger out cut off in times of need will i ever learn to grow? how can a perfect begining go so wrong so tragic hold me here where i seldom take breath and mend my heart for it is scared on my kitchen floor i wanted to start out right but the crud hit the fan and i slowly start to realize.. the blood was mine. how can i not hurt myself? how can my additions not come out? i hold myself a little heart an inabsorbed mind and a body i dont fit into something so less meaningful now was main concern noone knows these tears i cry. this home, i hate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 I read all three. May I please combine them? My heart hurts for you. *gives Lauren a really big hug* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted February 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 I read all three. May I please combine them? My heart hurts for you. *gives Lauren a really big hug* no. and i dont appreciate the editing, ugh, this place makes me so angry. i shouldnt post my poems here i really shouldnt at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 I read all three. May I please combine them? My heart hurts for you. *gives Lauren a really big hug* no. and i dont appreciate the editing, ugh, this place makes me so angry. i shouldnt post my poems here i really shouldnt at all. I am sorry you don't like the editing. You write really great poems. If you don't want to post them here, I cannot ask you to please continue doing so. As for combining them into one topic, I just wanted all three to remain and not be lost because no one posts in them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 dont stop posting your poems, i love reading them, even tho they make me sad, they are still good, keep posting then, plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 dont stop posting your poems, i love reading them, even tho they make me sad, they are still good, keep posting then, plz And you keep coming back to HampsterDance please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 i cant promise anything, im going through really a rough time in my life rite now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 22, 2007 Report Share Posted February 22, 2007 i cant promise anything, im going through really a rough time in my life rite now Can you make a topic and talk about it? We have some really great advice givers here. There is a relationship topic, for example, where a good number of posted. Please let me know if we can help. Talking about it is a really great start. And just in case you were unsure, we never judge you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 23, 2007 Report Share Posted February 23, 2007 i cant promise anything, im going through really a rough time in my life rite now Aww. ;.; Please, tell us about it and let us help you/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted February 25, 2007 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2007 i cant promise anything, im going through really a rough time in my life rite now write it out. its lame but it semi helps i guess. :]<3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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