InsanitysCaptive Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 This is probably a bad idea XD Point is, I wanna start a topic about...something. Ok, let's start The Downed Who would have known It would come to this. Although it's shown. But you, I wont miss. I wont cry and I wont die I'll just fabricate that same lie. Doesn't sound like me. I'm stripped of glee. Just a shell Of my inner -rhymes with shell-. But now I'm great And I can hate Who and what, And everything I want. I love to hate Everything you are. Because you hate, everyone and all. What you say and what you are is everything you can't discard. For if you do, you wont be you. You wont be me. You wont be anything at all. Ok who's next? Do multiple at once, that's what the cool kids do, unlike me __-__ (The next one will be nicer, I promise) XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Cheesus Posted February 9, 2007 Report Share Posted February 9, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today. However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >.< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >. You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >.< You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Not really. However, before you ask, here it is: "Hey. I'm sorry I've kept this from you, but I kinda have a crush on you. Hope you take this well. ^.^ sincerely, [cursive]Neil[/cursive] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >. You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Not really. However, before you ask, here it is: "Hey. I'm sorry I've kept this from you, but I kinda have a crush on you. Hope you take this well. ^.^ sincerely, [cursive]Neil[/cursive] NICE!!!! You show consideration, honesty and kindness. I hope she appreciates you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day won't leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >.< You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Not really. However, before you ask, here it is: "Hey. I'm sorry I've kept this from you, but I kinda have a crush on you. Hope you take this well. ^.^ sincerely, [cursive]Neil[/cursive] NICE!!!! You show consideration, honesty and kindness. I hope she appreciates you. The worst part about the situation (or it might turn out to be the best ;D) Is that she is in my class directly after she gets the rose. (and horatio, I made a typo in my poem above. Please change it to how I made it in this last set of quotes) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day won't leave me saying, "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >. You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Not really. However, before you ask, here it is: "Hey. I'm sorry I've kept this from you, but I kinda have a crush on you. Hope you take this well. ^.^ sincerely, [cursive]Neil[/cursive] NICE!!!! You show consideration, honesty and kindness. I hope she appreciates you. The worst part about the situation (or it might turn out to be the best ;D) Is that she is in my class directly after she gets the rose. (and horatio, I made a typo in my poem above. Please change it to how I made it in this last set of quotes) Okay, I am really, really blind. Where is your typo and what do I need to change? I look at what you have written in the quotes above and it seems to be the same all the way through. Put it in red, what I need to change please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* Songs are poetry! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 10, 2007 Report Share Posted February 10, 2007 Well, I bought a rose for kaitlin today.However, something made me feel dismay. I had to write a message, on the spot. Which made me nervous, quite a lot! What to write? I did not know. I couldn't leave it blank, dont'cha know? So there I was, no clue what to write, And this uncanny feeling of fright! What if I put down something silly, or sounds extremely stupid? I hope valentines day won't leave me saying, [i forgot to put "won't" in the original] "I think you missed my target, cupid." And by the way, that isn't the message I gave to Kaitlin. >.< You did such a great job on your post to us, that I believe with all my heart your message to her was stellar!!!!!!!!!!! Not really. However, before you ask, here it is: "Hey. I'm sorry I've kept this from you, but I kinda have a crush on you. Hope you take this well. ^.^ sincerely, [cursive]Neil[/cursive] NICE!!!! You show consideration, honesty and kindness. I hope she appreciates you. The worst part about the situation (or it might turn out to be the best ;D) Is that she is in my class directly after she gets the rose. (and horatio, I made a typo in my poem above. Please change it to how I made it in this last set of quotes) Okay, I am really, really blind. Where is your typo and what do I need to change? I look at what you have written in the quotes above and it seems to be the same all the way through. Put it in red, what I need to change please. Okay, I suppose I should have been more clear. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest InsanitysCaptive Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Yay, this is Ich...new and permanent sn XD Anywho, next one's for Paz, but I need to fix it a little because it was written for....well, another reason. But it serves its purpose now more than ever. Something Unreal You're the inspiration for the things I do, you're the reason I pull myself through. Day by day, in and out, you're everything I can't go on without. I thrive when we're together and I die when we're apart, and then I grow an ugly "spot" deep inside my heart. I feel so cold; I feel so dark. I only care for your remark. But when you're here, so close and dear, that "spot" seems so unreal. I know of some mistakes you've made, but that's all in the past. I love you the way you are today. I don't care what the others say, of what and how you are. I love you the way you are. To me, you're more than just another girl. You're the closest thing I've ever seen to a miracle. These will be my last words, now I await the ones you hold Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Beautiful!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 11, 2007 Report Share Posted February 11, 2007 Yay, this is Ich...new and permanent sn XD Anywho, next one's for Paz, but I need to fix it a little because it was written for....well, another reason. But it serves its purpose now more than ever. Something Unreal You're the inspiration for the things I do, you're the reason I pull myself through. Day by day, in and out, you're everything I can't go on without. I thrive when we're together and I die when we're apart, and then I grow an ugly "spot" deep inside my heart. I feel so cold; I feel so dark. I only care for your remark. But when you're here, so close and dear, that "spot" seems so unreal. I know of some mistakes you've made, but that's all in the past. I love you the way you are today. I don't care what the others say, of what and how you are. I love you the way you are. To me, you're more than just another girl. You're the closest thing I've ever seen to a miracle. These will be my last words, now I await the ones you hold Fantastic! Beautiful poem. That deserves a cheesey award! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
social_outcast Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Even though I'm consumed I see myself Falling Falling And I know I Need help but I keep Stalling Stalling So collapse And let the pain Wash it all away Replacing Replacing The emotional Hateful, sickening Ache that I Live Live with, but Not for long This newfound Pain Pain Feels so good And yet It's so bad It hurts me It hurts me It hurts me and Controlls me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Social Outcast, I am sorry you are hurting. Your poem is superb and full of expression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
social_outcast Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? No. It would be great if I did. That would make my life much easier. LOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? No. It would be great if I did. That would make my life much easier. LOL I think maybe signatures should have to be moderated before changed. >.> Cause, well, With the pictures you can get innapropriate material on there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 18, 2007 Report Share Posted February 18, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? No. It would be great if I did. That would make my life much easier. LOL I think maybe signatures should have to be moderated before changed. >.> Cause, well, With the pictures you can get innapropriate material on there. Arkcher pointed that out and I have notified HampsterKing. Arkcher is 1000% correct. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? No. It would be great if I did. That would make my life much easier. LOL I think maybe signatures should have to be moderated before changed. >.> Cause, well, With the pictures you can get innapropriate material on there. Arkcher pointed that out and I have notified HampsterKing. Arkcher is 1000% correct. Well, I didn't see that he pointed it out. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. aww, thanks. Roses are red, daisies are flowers. someone once said, horatio has super-powers! =O *hands Cheesemaster The Red Rose Award* Thank you so much. xD no problem. ^.^ Did you like your award? Indeed I do. ^.^ As you may have noticed, I updated my siggy already. ^.^ I did notice. You also changed the cheese. yep. xD You are always quick to pick up on that. So, do you get a notice whenever a siggy gets edited? No. It would be great if I did. That would make my life much easier. LOL I think maybe signatures should have to be moderated before changed. >.> Cause, well, With the pictures you can get innapropriate material on there. Arkcher pointed that out and I have notified HampsterKing. Arkcher is 1000% correct. Well, I didn't see that he pointed it out. xD Yes. Arkcher made a specific topic about it. I had already asked HampsterKing about it and then Arkcher brought it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 5, 2007 Report Share Posted March 5, 2007 so, I'm attempting to branch back out into multiple threads. XD I thought I'd share a poem of my own, something I wrote last April. --- There is a boy on the edge of the bed when the girl wakes up dreaming, What are you doing here? I let myself in. Oh. I have always wanted to do this. There is a kiss on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and skin and body. Me too. Tell me a story. Once upon a September, Yes? I looked across a crowed room and saw your face- for but a moment- and violins played, and I knew that you would be everything I need. It sounds like a beautiful love story. It wasn't. Why not? Your heart was not in it, and if you ever looked at me, it was not worth the turmoils of love. I looked. But you were beautiful to me. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And you are all I see. There is an apology on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and face and soul. Beauty is in your eyes. I never even saw you looking. I can't take my eyes off of you. You only love my compassion. It is true that I am lonely. How often do you count your chickens? As often as the moon shines in your eyes. My eyes do not stray long from the sun. But when they do, I will turn of the lights of the- There is a flicker at the edge of the bed, And a new voice, new face with dark empty eyes. -universe, and therin shall lie the answer. In terms of what? It is always in terms of x. Could it ever be in terms of me? I suppose it could be in terms of y. You could measure my intrigue. I would measure it in megahertz. But you would not know where to start. Don't know you? No. It starts with a kiss. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 5, 2007 Report Share Posted March 5, 2007 so, I'm attempting to branch back out into multiple threads. XD I thought I'd share a poem of my own, something I wrote last April. --- There is a boy on the edge of the bed when the girl wakes up dreaming, What are you doing here? I let myself in. Oh. I have always wanted to do this. There is a kiss on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and skin and body. Me too. Tell me a story. Once upon a September, Yes? I looked across a crowed room and saw your face- for but a moment- and violins played, and I knew that you would be everything I need. It sounds like a beautiful love story. It wasn't. Why not? Your heart was not in it, and if you ever looked at me, it was not worth the turmoils of love. I looked. But you were beautiful to me. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And you are all I see. There is an apology on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and face and soul. Beauty is in your eyes. I never even saw you looking. I can't take my eyes off of you. You only love my compassion. It is true that I am lonely. How often do you count your chickens? As often as the moon shines in your eyes. My eyes do not stray long from the sun. But when they do, I will turn of the lights of the- There is a flicker at the edge of the bed, And a new voice, new face with dark empty eyes. -universe, and therin shall lie the answer. In terms of what? It is always in terms of x. Could it ever be in terms of me? I suppose it could be in terms of y. You could measure my intrigue. I would measure it in megahertz. But you would not know where to start. Don't know you? No. It starts with a kiss. How terrific. You have such creative talent. Thanks for submitting your poem. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 so, I'm attempting to branch back out into multiple threads. XD I thought I'd share a poem of my own, something I wrote last April. --- There is a boy on the edge of the bed when the girl wakes up dreaming, What are you doing here? I let myself in. Oh. I have always wanted to do this. There is a kiss on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and skin and body. Me too. Tell me a story. Once upon a September, Yes? I looked across a crowed room and saw your face- for but a moment- and violins played, and I knew that you would be everything I need. It sounds like a beautiful love story. It wasn't. Why not? Your heart was not in it, and if you ever looked at me, it was not worth the turmoils of love. I looked. But you were beautiful to me. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. And you are all I see. There is an apology on the edge of the bed, And a boy with different hair and eyes and face and soul. Beauty is in your eyes. I never even saw you looking. I can't take my eyes off of you. You only love my compassion. It is true that I am lonely. How often do you count your chickens? As often as the moon shines in your eyes. My eyes do not stray long from the sun. But when they do, I will turn of the lights of the- There is a flicker at the edge of the bed, And a new voice, new face with dark empty eyes. -universe, and therin shall lie the answer. In terms of what? It is always in terms of x. Could it ever be in terms of me? I suppose it could be in terms of y. You could measure my intrigue. I would measure it in megahertz. But you would not know where to start. Don't know you? No. It starts with a kiss. intriguing. and strange. 25 points! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 intriguing. and strange. 25 points! ^.^ *snuggles the points* I will brush them and feed them and walk them and love them! and maybe even sumbit something else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 intriguing. and strange. 25 points! ^.^ *snuggles the points* I will brush them and feed them and walk them and love them! and maybe even sumbit something else. Please do!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 here, have another one. written during a break at work (I was a stock market analyst specialising in on-balance volume. there are some allusions to the stock market in there, that I don't know if anyone other than horatio might get, but that's okay, they're not necessary to the understanding of the poem.) --- Cold coffee in the mornings, and I can't concentrate at work. My thoughts are not ready for on-balance volume when I am so preoccupied with recent memories of you. all I can think about is how boys always lie and claim they felt nothing, the whole time, "I only meant it a little bit." "I only said it to humor you." "I never loved you, I swear." "I never meant to hurt you." when words have been said, and actions made, that say, "I look at you, and all my worries float away, and you are my escape from reality, and, at the same time, you are my reality, made so much better." "I want you near me." "I love you." "You glow. It's beautiful." in volumes beyond decibal measurement. The worst is "I never meant to hurt you." Because it is like an appology, without ever bothering to say the words, "I'm so sorry, now." And it fails to realise that it never matters if you meant it or not, because it still hurts, and it will continue to hurt, beyond the realm where appologies make things better. Even if I never say it, (and I never, never will), Even if I never tell you that it's hurting inside, somewhere I can't find, it will still be there, long after you are gone. I am tired of feeling this way, beautiful lovesick disaster caught in downside exhaustion. And I don't want to fall in l____ again, if they only keep on telling me, "It was never real," When it was as real to me, as this cold cup of coffee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 here, have another one. written during a break at work (I was a stock market analyst specialising in on-balance volume. there are some allusions to the stock market in there, that I don't know if anyone other than horatio might get, but that's okay, they're not necessary to the understanding of the poem.) --- Cold coffee in the mornings, and I can't concentrate at work. My thoughts are not ready for on-balance volume when I am so preoccupied with recent memories of you. all I can think about is how boys always lie and claim they felt nothing, the whole time, "I only meant it a little bit." "I only said it to humor you." "I never loved you, I swear." "I never meant to hurt you." when words have been said, and actions made, that say, "I look at you, and all my worries float away, and you are my escape from reality, and, at the same time, you are my reality, made so much better." "I want you near me." "I love you." "You glow. It's beautiful." in volumes beyond decibal measurement. The worst is "I never meant to hurt you." Because it is like an appology, without ever bothering to say the words, "I'm so sorry, now." And it fails to realise that it never matters if you meant it or not, because it still hurts, and it will continue to hurt, beyond the realm where appologies make things better. Even if I never say it, (and I never, never will), Even if I never tell you that it's hurting inside, somewhere I can't find, it will still be there, long after you are gone. I am tired of feeling this way, beautiful lovesick disaster caught in downside exhaustion. And I don't want to fall in l____ again, if they only keep on telling me, "It was never real," When it was as real to me, as this cold cup of coffee. Fantastic!!! You are so very talented and have the ability to express yourself eloquently! Please do keep contributing... we love your works. *hands Kep The Platinum Moon Award* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted March 6, 2007 Report Share Posted March 6, 2007 here, have another one. written during a break at work (I was a stock market analyst specialising in on-balance volume. there are some allusions to the stock market in there, that I don't know if anyone other than horatio might get, but that's okay, they're not necessary to the understanding of the poem.) --- Cold coffee in the mornings, and I can't concentrate at work. My thoughts are not ready for on-balance volume when I am so preoccupied with recent memories of you. all I can think about is how boys always lie and claim they felt nothing, the whole time, "I only meant it a little bit." "I only said it to humor you." "I never loved you, I swear." "I never meant to hurt you." when words have been said, and actions made, that say, "I look at you, and all my worries float away, and you are my escape from reality, and, at the same time, you are my reality, made so much better." "I want you near me." "I love you." "You glow. It's beautiful." in volumes beyond decibal measurement. The worst is "I never meant to hurt you." Because it is like an appology, without ever bothering to say the words, "I'm so sorry, now." And it fails to realise that it never matters if you meant it or not, because it still hurts, and it will continue to hurt, beyond the realm where appologies make things better. Even if I never say it, (and I never, never will), Even if I never tell you that it's hurting inside, somewhere I can't find, it will still be there, long after you are gone. I am tired of feeling this way, beautiful lovesick disaster caught in downside exhaustion. And I don't want to fall in l____ again, if they only keep on telling me, "It was never real," When it was as real to me, as this cold cup of coffee. 10 points! ( I would give more, but your now-current total of 65 is getting a bit high. Some other people need to come and contribute. >) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 8, 2007 Report Share Posted March 8, 2007 *wubbles the platinum mood award and the 10 points!* Aww, I'm so glad you like my stuff. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 8, 2007 Report Share Posted March 8, 2007 *wubbles the platinum mood award and the 10 points!* Aww, I'm so glad you like my stuff. *wonders if a platinum mood is good* LOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 9, 2007 Report Share Posted March 9, 2007 *wonders if a platinum mood is good* LOL ahahaha. I'm so bad for typos, lately. XD I bet a platinum mood is FANTASTIC. ^.~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 9, 2007 Report Share Posted March 9, 2007 *wonders if a platinum mood is good* LOL ahahaha. I'm so bad for typos, lately. XD I bet a platinum mood is FANTASTIC. ^.~ It was a great typo! Sure did put a smile on my face. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kep Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 a bit scrappy, if I do say so myself. Written last May. ---- At night, she dreams of cellists from the land immortalized by Bartok, with touseled hair, and liquid brown eyes. Bilingual and beautiful, he confides in her, secrets she can barely remember by the time she wakes. Every night, she'll give everything, anything for his love. She gives the retinas with which she sees the world, her ventricles, each finger, every part inside her that sings whenever she hears Brahms, and the lungs that can't breathe whenever Heifetz plays Sibelius. Her dream lover is an extension of her being. and there is no pain quite like being cleaved in two, when he tells her that she chose an instrument with too few strings. So, by day, she dreams of pianists, from the land of her ancestors and immortalized by Chopin. The kind of Prince Charming that won't let her cry, and the stability of a love without complications- a sedative for the delicate procedure of putting her back together again. She dreams of dreamless sleep. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted March 11, 2007 Report Share Posted March 11, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cuit*~* -loudly runs into room- MK want poem!! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronmy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cuit*~* -loudly runs into room- MK want poem!! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronmy Domine*~* Mk is a shroom. that is a fact. she causes doom. Things aren't intact. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cuit*~* -loudly runs into room- MK want poem!! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronmy Domine*~* Mk is a shroom. that is a fact. she causes doom. Things aren't intact. Good one Cheesie!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted March 12, 2007 Report Share Posted March 12, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cuit*~* -loudly runs into room- MK want poem!! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronmy Domine*~* Mk is a shroom. that is a fact. she causes doom. Things aren't intact. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* YOU SWINE!!! WHY IS THERE NO MENTION OF PINK FLOYD OR JOEY RAMONE!!! -throws you in The Meat Grinder- Have a Cloudy Aisha Ribbon! Heh heh... *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cheesus Posted March 13, 2007 Report Share Posted March 13, 2007 Oh, thank you Horatio! You should put some poems up too....*sure that Horatio has SOME hidden talent besides kindness* Let's see... Roses are red, Water is clear, I'm so happy now, Social Outcast has returned here. Not too good, but the best I can do before coffee. xD 5 points, horatio. (Y'know, I should start handing out points on occasion. And y'all can start counting how manyz you got.) So, get some coffee and try again! Roses are pink, Daisies are yellow, I will tell you what I think, Cheesemaster is a great fellow. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cuit*~* -loudly runs into room- MK want poem!! *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronmy Domine*~* Mk is a shroom. that is a fact. she causes doom. Things aren't intact. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* YOU SWINE!!! WHY IS THERE NO MENTION OF PINK FLOYD OR JOEY RAMONE!!! -throws you in The Meat Grinder- Have a Cloudy Aisha Ribbon! Heh heh... *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Thanks. xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchwork Posted March 29, 2007 Report Share Posted March 29, 2007 watching as laughter fades the starts gleam grinning down teasing a childish mind come play with us, they resound come fly where pain is gone come jump and laugh and play come, make a wondrous mess you can go home any day we promise you'll have fun we promise you'll want more we promise what only we can keep too bad our promises are forevermore yay peer pressure vacuum! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted March 29, 2007 Report Share Posted March 29, 2007 watching as laughter fadesthe starts gleam grinning down teasing a childish mind come play with us, they resound come fly where pain is gone come jump and laugh and play come, make a wondrous mess you can go home any day we promise you'll have fun we promise you'll want more we promise what only we can keep too bad our promises are forevermore yay peer pressure vacuum! *loves more great poetry* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patchwork Posted March 29, 2007 Report Share Posted March 29, 2007 watching as laughter fadesthe starts gleam grinning down teasing a childish mind come play with us, they resound come fly where pain is gone come jump and laugh and play come, make a wondrous mess you can go home any day we promise you'll have fun we promise you'll want more we promise what only we can keep too bad our promises are forevermore yay peer pressure vacuum! *loves more great poetry* muh siggeh is also entered, you just can't tell Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted April 2, 2007 Report Share Posted April 2, 2007 A Whisper in the Shadow [can you hear me?] [can you see me?] [i'll be your friend...] [if you'll leave me] [will you trust me?] [will you follow?] [i'll give you glory...] [if you'll just go] [i hear your call] [for help at night] [i want to help...] [but for a price] [do you know me?] [do you know him?] [i'll break your enemy...] [if you'll break treason] .don.t.believe.in.him. .don.t.listen.to.reality. .i.want.to.be.yours. .but.you.can.t.break.free. [blatantly lying to you] [i can overcome it] [listen to my sweet words] [and you will become it] [your worst enemy] [or your best ally] [identify me now] [Light One, who am i?] [can i trust you?] [can i give you power?] [will you come to me] [in my darkest hour?] [not can i, will i?] [will you let me in?] [i hear you begging] [your words run thin] .i.am.the.strongest. .i.can.do.anything. .listen.not.to.truth. .i.want.your.worshipping. {but a new voice comes} {shunning the shadow} {I choose to save you child} {come and you will know} {how do we learn} {if we do not step forward} {the uncharted path} {I will guide you home} [leave, this one is mine] {who created all?} {who created you?} [begone, or I'll let fall] {you dare squabble over a soul?} {you think you would win?} {it comes to a choice} [i've been let in] .the.truth.does.not.always.win. .it.is.always.a.choice. .life.is.all.a.choice. .will.you.use.your.voice. -thegreatcalling- Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InsanitysCaptive Posted April 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2007 *rises from dead* yep _-_ Let's start off easy, eh? -Awful/Sweet- Not a place to call my own Not even a home Cold and alone All I wanted was a real home Don't assume anything Especially in the spring The reality will set you straight In the season of renewing Of everything said None of it I will disregard It'll be with me to the end Just realized...I'm no closer than a dummy. Cruddy ending, I know. But it serves a purpose, as silly as it seems >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted April 17, 2007 Report Share Posted April 17, 2007 *rises from dead* yep _-_ Let's start off easy, eh? -Awful/Sweet- Not a place to call my own Not even a home Cold and alone All I wanted was a real home Don't assume anything Especially in the spring The reality will set you straight In the season of renewing Of everything said None of it I will disregard It'll be with me to the end Just realized...I'm no closer than a dummy. Cruddy ending, I know. But it serves a purpose, as silly as it seems >.> hmm. should I mouth or let slide? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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