xMyOwnMindx Posted January 19, 2007 Report Share Posted January 19, 2007 take a beating take some words the hurt the pain the smiles and all the rest is written in song isnt it? im sure ive heard it all before slightly disfigured depending on the lifestyle but composed just the same just the same and who i am? to talk and teach to tell right and wrong are opinions and thats all i know i think the stress is bothering me the hate overpowering everyday i breathe and sit and doodle and dream of a world where my actions made the slightest difference and i get nine hours of sleep each night i cry i laugh i breathe i exhale. i cough and boom, the world comes spinning back and the hunger overpowers me i binge and guilt trip and binge again. my habbits are a deathwish i walk among the lifeless we float above the earth ive never felt that cloud you hold so close to your heart ive never felt it completely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 This is another example of the terrific talent you have. Thank you for writing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted January 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 thanks. i used to write alot more. but i think i wrote alot worse. isnt that weird? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted January 21, 2007 Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 thanks. i used to write alot more. but i think i wrote alot worse. isnt that weird? I think you are far too critical of yourself regarding your past work. Your poems are getting better and better and as you said, fewer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted January 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2007 thanks. i used to write alot more. but i think i wrote alot worse. isnt that weird? I think you are far too critical of yourself regarding your past work. Your poems are getting better and better and as you said, fewer. yeah. idk how not to be critical. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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