xMyOwnMindx Posted September 22, 2006 Report Share Posted September 22, 2006 the mascara on the pillow bare of pillow case this means nothing it all means nothing the wrappers in my room are props to keep you happy and the hope im holding onto is shallow hope but inside i'd never let it go and i feel moved again who am i this day? why am i lying to them? the phases i cant handle sheltered never let me figure this out never let me run away and fall on my own because they are so much i should feel blessed but i dont i cant find a single thing left in this world to live for who knew love would be so meaningless am i liar lying to my own heart ive never felt this way do i lie.. everyday? if i dont know, then how can you? i need a day to curl away and shut out the lights theyre too bright for my swollen eyes i cant do this its neverending and ill play the same game untill your all there is and everything else fades to the background i dont know why i am.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 22, 2006 Report Share Posted September 22, 2006 Thanks for continuing to write. This is a very insightful poem on a difficult subject. Really and awesome job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 Lauren, part of the reasaon your writing is so good in our eyes is becasue we can almost hear a whisper of your voice (which we've never heard) saying it. It's really powerful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* I really like your poems, Lauren. Another Cloudy Aisha ribbon for you. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted September 23, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 thanks guys. it means so much you like my 'work' Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 thanks guys.it means so much you like my 'work' You have lots of talent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted September 23, 2006 Report Share Posted September 23, 2006 ^ it's true Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted September 25, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2006 i wish i knew how to expand it or somthing i dont wanna take "creative writing" classes or somthing though. cuz i HATE writing things in/for school.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted September 26, 2006 Report Share Posted September 26, 2006 i wish i knew how to expand it or somthingi dont wanna take "creative writing" classes or somthing though. cuz i HATE writing things in/for school.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* Same here. "I like to draw/It seems so right/but it's not art/when they tell you what to write." ~.~ My pathetic attempt to rhyme. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted September 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2006 i wish i knew how to expand it or somthing i dont wanna take "creative writing" classes or somthing though. cuz i HATE writing things in/for school.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* Same here. "I like to draw/It seems so right/but it's not art/when they tell you what to write." ~.~ My pathetic attempt to rhyme. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* tru. its kinda of not. even if i have a choice of subject matter, i just feel forced and dont want to do it.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted September 26, 2006 Report Share Posted September 26, 2006 i wish i knew how to expand it or somthing i dont wanna take "creative writing" classes or somthing though. cuz i HATE writing things in/for school.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* Same here. "I like to draw/It seems so right/but it's not art/when they tell you what to write." ~.~ My pathetic attempt to rhyme. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* tru. its kinda of not. even if i have a choice of subject matter, i just feel forced and dont want to do it.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* It can really annoy me. In English, we have something were we pick a topic from a list of 100 topics and write. It's not fun, and I never feel good writing it. I wish I could find my Invision Book. I need to continue writing it... If I have a choice of subject matter, it really depends on if I do it. If I can write my Giza or Invision stories, I'm okay, but if they won't let me I end up not doing it. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted September 27, 2006 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 i wish i knew how to expand it or somthing i dont wanna take "creative writing" classes or somthing though. cuz i HATE writing things in/for school.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* Same here. "I like to draw/It seems so right/but it's not art/when they tell you what to write." ~.~ My pathetic attempt to rhyme. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* tru. its kinda of not. even if i have a choice of subject matter, i just feel forced and dont want to do it.. *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* It can really annoy me. In English, we have something were we pick a topic from a list of 100 topics and write. It's not fun, and I never feel good writing it. I wish I could find my Invision Book. I need to continue writing it... If I have a choice of subject matter, it really depends on if I do it. If I can write my Giza or Invision stories, I'm okay, but if they won't let me I end up not doing it. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy domine*~* that stinks. my class doesnt write that much. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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