Glowurm Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 No food No water No shelter No company This is how I want to be Desrve to be I want none of what I have It's all worthless to me Items can not fix a broken heart Not a heart broken by a person A person I loved A person I would caress, on a lovely spring eve A person who would leave me Just a week after For someone else Good at sports Handsome But he didn't want her love He wanted her body And now she is as heartbroken as I And I can not love her As she desires For who can love one who broke your own heart? (The above is not true, I wanted to see how bad I am at writing sad poems ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 No foodNo water No shelter No company This is how I want to be Desrve to be I want none of what I have It's all worthless to me Items can not fix a broken heart Not a heart broken by a person A person I loved A person I would caress, on a lovely spring eve A person who would leave me Just a week after For someone else Good at sports Handsome But he didn't want her love He wanted her body And now she is as heartbroken as I And I can not love her As she desires For who can love one who broke your own heart? (The above is not true, I wanted to see how bad I am at writing sad poems ) You are fantastic at writing poems!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 i would have to say pretty good, better than myn anyways Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 No foodNo water No shelter No company This is how I want to be Desrve to be I want none of what I have It's all worthless to me Items can not fix a broken heart Not a heart broken by a person A person I loved A person I would caress, on a lovely spring eve A person who would leave me Just a week after For someone else Good at sports Handsome But he didn't want her love He wanted her body And now she is as heartbroken as I And I can not love her As she desires For who can love one who broke your own heart? (The above is not true, I wanted to see how bad I am at writing sad poems ) i like it. my poems will be similar when me and rob break up i always assumed he'd dump me, cuz im codependent and hes there for me but he thinks were actually gonna be together forever he's even "waiting" for me no one thats expects a less then like 3 month relationship does that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 me and my girlfriend where together for 2 and a half, and now we are apart and it hurts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 me and my girlfriend where together for 2 and a half, and now we are apart and it hurts 2 and 1/2 years???????? I am sorry your heart hurts. It does not help, but I ask you to believe that someone better will come along and sweep you off your feet. I give you my word, it will happen. Maybe not tomorrow, maybe not next week, but when you stop looking, it will then happen. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 no 2 and a half months if it wuz 2 and a half years i would probly be in MUCH worse state rite now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 no 2 and a half months if it wuz 2 and a half years i would probly be in MUCH worse state rite now 2 and one half months is still a long time. She will wake up later and realize what she lost and you will have someone better in your life. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 hopefully so how r u horatio? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 31, 2006 Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 aw im sorry you broke up. i told rob that keef and lindsey's 5 month in the 7th and he was like "were gonna be together longer then that" i wonder just how long he thinks were gonna last.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted September 5, 2006 Report Share Posted September 5, 2006 aw im sorry you broke up.i told rob that keef and lindsey's 5 month in the 7th and he was like "were gonna be together longer then that" i wonder just how long he thinks were gonna last.. um, Lauren, look at what he's saying. He wants to be with you forever. WHy else would a guy "wait" for his girlfriend? I'm speakin gfrom experience, here. I only date potential mates. Ich and I plan on getting married, but I can never tell my mom until after the fact. She'd have a cow if she learned that her 17yrold daughter is already planning her wedding. Gosh, that makes me sound like a harlot... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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