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ok im going to try a shot at a poem here... so dont make fun of me if this stinks

 

 

 

Is life worthit?

ive been hurt so deep

i dont know if i could do it again

im afraid to trust

it has been betrayed so many times

sometimes i just feel like ending it all

ending this tourment

ending this lie

ending this pain

ending everything....

 

 

 

yeah i didnt write that much and i know its not as good as laurens poems but its about wut i feel rite now...

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ok im going to try a shot at a poem here... so dont make fun of me if this stinks

 

 

 

Is life worthit?

ive been hurt so deep

i dont know if i could do it again

im afraid to trust

it has been betrayed so many times

sometimes i just feel like ending it all

ending this tourment

ending this lie

ending this pain

ending everything....

 

 

 

yeah i didnt write that much and i know its not as good as laurens poems but its about wut i feel rite now...

:wub: aw dont be intimidated by my work. its really not THAT good.

i liked your poem. its real.

i know saying "i like it" doesnt mean that much but i mean it, and take that to heart and it will mean so much more.

 

keep writing, its good for your soul <3

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ok im going to try a shot at a poem here... so dont make fun of me if this stinks

 

 

 

Is life worthit?

ive been hurt so deep

i dont know if i could do it again

im afraid to trust

it has been betrayed so many times

sometimes i just feel like ending it all

ending this tourment

ending this lie

ending this pain

ending everything....

 

 

 

yeah i didnt write that much and i know its not as good as laurens poems but its about wut i feel rite now...

*gives you a KUDOS award*

 

No, it's not edible. WHy are you feeling down?

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just like, pretty much everything in my life rite now save a few things.

Well, just know that everyone here will support you and love you no matter how your life may go. *hugs hamster lover*

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just like, pretty much everything in my life rite now save a few things.

Well, just know that everyone here will support you and love you no matter how your life may go. *hugs hamster lover*

*joins Cheesemaster in a group hug for Hamster Luver*

*makes the hug a super mega hammie bear huggle*

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