xMyOwnMindx Posted August 11, 2006 Report Share Posted August 11, 2006 she was only 12 years old still a little girl the happiest one i knew brightened the room as she walked thru the doors never even seen her frown she was pretty and hyper and made me act younger then i should she was outgoing and smart she never did anything wrong but she wasnt stuck up she got along with everyone the last time i saw her frozen in my memories was smiling and waving my family goodbye who knew it was a big goodbye her last smile who justifies things like that to steal a childs soul she was so young so joyful deep down i thought she was gonna always be that way have a big future a big family and that smile was always there a phone call later and a dinner talk reveals her sudden tragic turn and the guy that ripped her soul away the things that never can heal inside her now i'll always remember that big grin and all the girls she used to laugh and play with i could never see her take her own life a life, turned but such a hateful deed and it makes me cry to know that bad things always happen to good people the ones that never saw it coming attacked and stolen from her she'll never be the same. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 11, 2006 Report Share Posted August 11, 2006 Incredible! This is fantastic!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted August 11, 2006 Report Share Posted August 11, 2006 she was only 12 years oldstill a little girl the happiest one i knew brightened the room as she walked thru the doors never even seen her frown she was pretty and hyper and made me act younger then i should she was outgoing and smart she never did anything wrong but she wasnt stuck up she got along with everyone the last time i saw her frozen in my memories was smiling and waving my family goodbye who knew it was a big goodbye her last smile who justifies things like that to steal a childs soul she was so young so joyful deep down i thought she was gonna always be that way have a big future a big family and that smile was always there a phone call later and a dinner talk reveals her sudden tragic turn and the guy that ripped her soul away the things that never can heal inside her now i'll always remember that big grin and all the girls she used to laugh and play with i could never see her take her own life a life, turned but such a hateful deed and it makes me cry to know that bad things always happen to good people the ones that never saw it coming attacked and stolen from her she'll never be the same. *~*The Grand Illusion*~* This is a Great poem. I need to give you my Cloudy aisha Award for it. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 11, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2006 thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 12, 2006 Report Share Posted August 12, 2006 thanks. *hands over three KUDOS awards* very good writing! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glowurm Posted August 12, 2006 Report Share Posted August 12, 2006 *hands over a Poetic Panther award* That's right, a new award. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 12, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2006 thanks guys. i guess its easy to write about somthing real. not just a bunch of thoughts in my head. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 thanks guys.i guess its easy to write about somthing real. not just a bunch of thoughts in my head. ur welcome. It is easier, sometimes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 thanks guys. i guess its easy to write about somthing real. not just a bunch of thoughts in my head. ur welcome. It is easier, sometimes. i feel less selfish now that ive written a poem that isnt about me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vixen. Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 she was only 12 years oldstill a little girl the happiest one i knew brightened the room as she walked thru the doors never even seen her frown she was pretty and hyper and made me act younger then i should she was outgoing and smart she never did anything wrong but she wasnt stuck up she got along with everyone the last time i saw her frozen in my memories was smiling and waving my family goodbye who knew it was a big goodbye her last smile who justifies things like that to steal a childs soul she was so young so joyful deep down i thought she was gonna always be that way have a big future a big family and that smile was always there a phone call later and a dinner talk reveals her sudden tragic turn and the guy that ripped her soul away the things that never can heal inside her now i'll always remember that big grin and all the girls she used to laugh and play with i could never see her take her own life a life, turned but such a hateful deed and it makes me cry to know that bad things always happen to good people the ones that never saw it coming attacked and stolen from her she'll never be the same. Love it. Touched a nerve though. ♥ Lee Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! i am a poet. if that bothers you then simply ignore them. Vixen.- thanks :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. same here. You can find my stuff under search, unless I decide to post in them via my word document of al my writing links. That way I never lose them Prety smart, huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. same here. You can find my stuff under search, unless I decide to post in them via my word document of al my writing links. That way I never lose them Prety smart, huh? Great idea! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 14, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. same here. You can find my stuff under search, unless I decide to post in them via my word document of al my writing links. That way I never lose them Prety smart, huh? ha, smarter than i Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. same here. You can find my stuff under search, unless I decide to post in them via my word document of al my writing links. That way I never lose them Prety smart, huh? ha, smarter than i if you'd like, I can search for all of them and save them for you and then post in them through word and they'll ressurect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 15, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 WHY ARE U ALWAYS WRITING POEMS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I will try and answer... she uses poetry to express her feelings. For some people this is a wonderful way to share what is happening in their lives. For other people, this is a really great way to know you are not alone in what is happening in your life, that someone else has gone through something similar. same here. You can find my stuff under search, unless I decide to post in them via my word document of al my writing links. That way I never lose them Prety smart, huh? ha, smarter than i if you'd like, I can search for all of them and save them for you and then post in them through word and they'll ressurect. if you wish Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 um okay, your poems are very good. But i have a question for you.......YOU ARE WRITING YOUR POEMS ON A HAMPSTERDANCE FAN CLUB MESSAGE BOARD!.....i don't get! why would you write them here? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 16, 2006 Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 um okay, your poems are very good. But i have a question for you.......YOU ARE WRITING YOUR POEMS ON A HAMPSTERDANCE FAN CLUB MESSAGE BOARD!.....i don't get! why would you write them here? Because she is writing in a forum that is called Stories, Poems and anything written. This is where you create written works. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 16, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 16, 2006 um okay, your poems are very good. But i have a question for you.......YOU ARE WRITING YOUR POEMS ON A HAMPSTERDANCE FAN CLUB MESSAGE BOARD!.....i don't get! why would you write them here? thank you and i write them here becuase theres a whole section for them.. so why not? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 17, 2006 Report Share Posted August 17, 2006 Hampsterdudet, why don't you try and write a few poems. I bet you would be great at it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 17, 2006 Report Share Posted August 17, 2006 okay, whatever. and i don't think i'd be good at writing a poem. i'm more good at writing stories. funny stories. i'm more of a comedian. For example my Super Pizza Guy series! (with I'm not done with!) its funny..but i keep on running out of ideas...and i haven't been doing them for a LONG TIME! Actually...i'm not sure I even know where they are! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 okay, whatever. and i don't think i'd be good at writing a poem. i'm more good at writing stories. funny stories. i'm more of a comedian. For example my Super Pizza Guy series! (with I'm not done with!) its funny..but i keep on running out of ideas...and i haven't been doing them for a LONG TIME! Actually...i'm not sure I even know where they are! We love funny stories. Would you please try and write one? I am certain you are probably terrific at anything artistic, written and creative. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 22, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 23, 2006 Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 anyway,its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 23, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? the poem. i havnt seen rachel in 2(maybe 3) years... in my mind shes a happy little girl. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 25, 2006 Report Share Posted August 25, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? the poem. i havnt seen rachel in 2(maybe 3) years... in my mind shes a happy little girl. I know how that is. A worse change is that which happens when you promise someone something and when they try to take you up on it, your worst expriences come back to you in a violent flash of recollection. Oooh, I think I'll use that in my next rambling... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 26, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? the poem. i havnt seen rachel in 2(maybe 3) years... in my mind shes a happy little girl. I know how that is. A worse change is that which happens when you promise someone something and when they try to take you up on it, your worst expriences come back to you in a violent flash of recollection. Oooh, I think I'll use that in my next rambling... im kinda of scared of what you (wut i think you may mean)mean.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Topazia Posted August 26, 2006 Report Share Posted August 26, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? the poem. i havnt seen rachel in 2(maybe 3) years... in my mind shes a happy little girl. I know how that is. A worse change is that which happens when you promise someone something and when they try to take you up on it, your worst expriences come back to you in a violent flash of recollection. Oooh, I think I'll use that in my next rambling... im kinda of scared of what you (wut i think you may mean)mean.. Oh, don't worry nothing like THAT. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 27, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 anyway, its weird how things change when you dont see people for 2 years. tragic. *wonders* Huh? the poem. i havnt seen rachel in 2(maybe 3) years... in my mind shes a happy little girl. I know how that is. A worse change is that which happens when you promise someone something and when they try to take you up on it, your worst expriences come back to you in a violent flash of recollection. Oooh, I think I'll use that in my next rambling... im kinda of scared of what you (wut i think you may mean)mean.. Oh, don't worry nothing like THAT. yea.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 xMyOwnMindx: um....i was looking at your signature and........"skinny is sexy" now i am TOTALLY creeped out! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushroom_king Posted August 27, 2006 Report Share Posted August 27, 2006 um okay, your poems are very good. But i have a question for you.......YOU ARE WRITING YOUR POEMS ON A HAMPSTERDANCE FAN CLUB MESSAGE BOARD!.....i don't get! why would you write them here? *~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~* ...Actually, we don't really post about the hamsters so much. *~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 28, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 xMyOwnMindx: um....i was looking at your signature and........"skinny is sexy" now i am TOTALLY creeped out! um. my whole siggy is like.. 98% ana all the time why/how is that creepy though? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glowurm Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 xMyOwnMindx: um....i was looking at your signature and........"skinny is sexy" now i am TOTALLY creeped out! um. my whole siggy is like.. 98% ana all the time why/how is that creepy though? Some people find anorexia, bulimea, and similar things creepy. It's a matter of opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 what if there was little kids on this site that could read and saw that!!!!!!!!!!!! Like me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(sort of!) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 what if there was little kids on this site that could read and saw that!!!!!!!!!!!! Like me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(sort of!) I hope you never become anorexic or bulimic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 28, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 what if there was little kids on this site that could read and saw that!!!!!!!!!!!! Like me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(sort of!) i had no idea what an eating disorder was when i was a little kid. so just ignore it. i understand how ana/mia can disturb smaller kids but she said "skinny is sexy" was the creepy part.. thats not creepy... show me some fat models that look good... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 haha food is to good to throw up or just not eat at all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 28, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 haha food is to good to throw up or just not eat at all i hate puking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 28, 2006 Report Share Posted August 28, 2006 when im sick i like it, cuz it makes me feel better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 when im sick i like it, cuz it makes me feel better i just hate it all the time. when im really sick i dont eat alot so theres nothing to puke up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 whats that mean? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 I'm just saying that sexy isn't really a word a younger are really...supossed to use, ya know? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 and there we go! why are u guys talking about PUKING?! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 29, 2006 Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 haha hampsterdudelet we both know u posted like those 10 words in 3 posts just to get ur number of posts up mabey i should try it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 29, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2006 and there we go! why are u guys talking about PUKING?! um if you READ it were saying its BAD. and everyone around here started calling guys/girls sexy at the age of like 8.. so unless your under 8 idk why your so weirded by the word 'sexy' if you dont like wut we talk about in certain topics why do you read them? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 oh just forget it! and by the way...my name isn't hampsterdudelet! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 go to general hamsterdance talk, its better over there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 i mean... ya know, if u dont like it here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 oh just forget it! and by the way...my name isn't hampsterdudelet! I was asking TBFOF to help you with the HampsterDance greeting that he and Cheesemaster give everyone. He was only trying to help. So, you can be mad at me if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 huh? that didnt make any sence at all to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horatio Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 huh? that didnt make any sence at all to me Disregard, I thought she was talking about TBFOF. But now that I looked back, I realize you made a typo in her name. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hamster Luver Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 ooooooooo, i get it alittle better, not not perfect Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fdgirl Posted August 30, 2006 Report Share Posted August 30, 2006 uh huh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xMyOwnMindx Posted August 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2006 oh just forget it! and by the way...my name isn't hampsterdudelet! forgotten. byebye. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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