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ok ya'll have read this one before (this will be a LONG post)

 

Bonnie

 

 

 

You left me one day.

 

 

That night before a full moon you did bay.

 

 

A wonderful sound,

 

 

the sound of love.

 

 

A wonderful sound like the coo of a dove.

 

 

I'll never see you again.

 

 

For now' now you are dead

 

 

I miss you so' my puppy of love.

 

 

I miss your love,

 

 

that sounds like the coo of a dove.

 

 

Why oh, why did you go?

 

 

 

ok this next is called poems i wrote it today this will be the last one of the day cause soon i have to hit the hay ( that rhyme was not part of the poem it just comes naturally)

 

 

 

Poems (kind ah weird)

 

 

 

A sense of love.

 

 

A sense of feelings.

 

 

Here you express all your daelings.

 

 

What goes on in life,

 

 

family, children, friends, mother, and wife.

 

 

Poems can be about anything.

 

 

From love to the writing of your own poems,

 

 

or oddly and strangly enuff garden gnomes.

 

 

Prom dates and balls.

 

 

Or even the creepy 6th grade halls.

 

 

mom, dad, brother and sister,

 

 

how he missed her and kissed her.(eww..)

 

 

Places you've been,

 

 

places you've seen.

 

 

Or how you describe mean.

 

 

Stupid calls,

 

 

a stupid fear.

 

 

Even all the flavors of beer. (me no drinky)

 

 

Poems it's your chioce,

 

 

don't be afraid, look at all of what I made.

 

 

 

 

 

so do you like them

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more poems:

 

 

Katie's memory of her life was all about

 

slamming against a dike

 

a dam to hold back water

 

while in front of her was her father

 

he rode his bike

 

her life she thought was pointless

 

no beginning no end

 

and his life

 

fun and free

 

as happy as can be

 

he saw in the mirror his dimples

 

to everyone he did share

 

now katie wishes her life was happy and carefree

 

but it's not

 

it's nothing about me

 

 

 

black white and brown

 

 

we left you with my dad

 

while we were out of town

 

happy thoughts never run through my mine

 

because i miss you

 

so fuzzy and so kind

 

i love you and you love me

 

when we were together our heartts were full of glee

 

you were soft you were fuzzy

 

kind and kinewhen you took a bath you looked like a shiny dime

 

i miss you

 

and some times i wonder if you miss me too

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more poems:

 

 

Katie's memory of her life was all about

 

slamming against a dike

 

a dam to hold back water

 

while in front of her was her father

 

he rode his bike

 

her life she thought was pointless

 

no beginning no end

 

and his life

 

fun and free

 

as happy as can be

 

he saw in the mirror his dimples

 

to everyone he did share

 

now katie wishes her life was happy and carefree

 

but it's not

 

it's nothing about me

 

 

 

black white and brown

 

 

we left you with my dad

 

while we were out of town

 

happy thoughts never run through my mine

 

because i miss you

 

so fuzzy and so kind

 

i love you and you love me

 

when we were together our heartts were full of glee

 

you were soft you were fuzzy

 

kind and kinewhen you took a bath you looked like a shiny dime

 

i miss you

 

and some times i wonder if you miss me too

 

first one=confusing

second one=sad and cute!! :)

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

I need to give you The Platinum Moon Award for all your poetry. You write some beautiful poetry. :lol:

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

I need to give you The Platinum Moon Award for all your poetry. You write some beautiful poetry. :lol:

 

thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

I need to give you The Platinum Moon Award for all your poetry. You write some beautiful poetry. :lol:

 

thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

I need to give you The Platinum Moon Award for all your poetry. You write some beautiful poetry. :lol:

 

thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

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very nice!!!!

just one little thing: in ur siggy, it says the dog lover award, and my award is the good dog award. no biggie. it doesnt really matter 2 me

thanks guys sor doglover

 

 

 

why ( i wrote this. it made me cry. it is for my best friend/crush but he has a major crush on my other friend)

 

 

 

i know she doesnt want to break your heart or tear it in two

 

but i dont understand why she wont go out with you

 

you're a really nice guy

 

and a really great friend

 

and i would be heart broken if our friendship were to ever end

I need to give you The Platinum Moon Award for all your poetry. You write some beautiful poetry. :lol:

 

thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

I have a question for you... what are you doing when you quote? Somehow you are deleting the top of the quote which removes all the boxes.

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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

I have a question for you... what are you doing when you quote? Somehow you are deleting the top of the quote which removes all the boxes.

 

o erase some so i am not reply no a whole lot of stuff like on this i deleted all the part abpve what started it like i said that i loved him but i ddnt mean you then you got all sad cause you thought i hated you but said i LOVE you only as a friend that was the only important part of my reply do you get it ?????

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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

I have a question for you... what are you doing when you quote? Somehow you are deleting the top of the quote which removes all the boxes.

 

o erase some so i am not reply no a whole lot of stuff like on this i deleted all the part abpve what started it like i said that i loved him but i ddnt mean you then you got all sad cause you thought i hated you but said i LOVE you only as a friend that was the only important part of my reply do you get it ?????

When you remove a quote, you need to remove from the

part through the [.../quote] part. That way the boxes will remain.
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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

I have a question for you... what are you doing when you quote? Somehow you are deleting the top of the quote which removes all the boxes.

 

o erase some so i am not reply no a whole lot of stuff like on this i deleted all the part abpve what started it like i said that i loved him but i ddnt mean you then you got all sad cause you thought i hated you but said i LOVE you only as a friend that was the only important part of my reply do you get it ?????

When you remove a quote, you need to remove from the

part through the [.../quote] part. That way the boxes will remain.

 

ok sorry about that did you get my email

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thankyou man i love that guy.....not you you as a friend i'm talking about the guy i wrote the poem for.......that all came out wrong

You don't love me? :(

And I thought I was such a lovable hamster. :lol:

 

i do love you just not like LOVE you

Phew! Just as long as I know I am loved! :lol:

 

YOU ARE

I have a question for you... what are you doing when you quote? Somehow you are deleting the top of the quote which removes all the boxes.

 

o erase some so i am not reply no a whole lot of stuff like on this i deleted all the part abpve what started it like i said that i loved him but i ddnt mean you then you got all sad cause you thought i hated you but said i LOVE you only as a friend that was the only important part of my reply do you get it ?????

When you remove a quote, you need to remove from the

part through the [.../quote] part. That way the boxes will remain.

 

ok sorry about that did you get my email

No need to apologize... I figured you didn't know, so I thought I would help you.

Thank you for adopting me!!! :D

I am a happy hammie now!!!!!!

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No need to apologize... I figured you didn't know, so I thought I would help you.

Thank you for adopting me!!! :D

I am a happy hammie now!!!!!!

 

yeah

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  • 2 weeks later...

another poem

 

 

 

why we ask just sitting

 

why do we try to listen and hear

 

this means nothing to us nothing at all

 

why learn this #### if doesn't mean a thing

 

if it when we grow up it won't ring a bell no ding

 

we're bored to deth all we want to do is die

 

one question we still ask is why

 

 

 

btw i just wrote this it poped into my mind when i replyed to myownmind's

 

poemy thing (really good)

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  • 1 year later...
I found this one. I will keep looking. :D

 

omg thanks i think thats all there was im not sure though ha i remember adopting you i don't think i own you anymore :(

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I found this one. I will keep looking. :D

 

omg thanks i think thats all there was im not sure though ha i remember adopting you i don't think i own you anymore :(

After you adopted me, I didn't think you gave me up. :lol:

 

i didn't give you up i think someone deleted it of my website :(

 

wrote a poem when i found out my ex boyfreind was moving want to he... read it??

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I found this one. I will keep looking. :D

 

omg thanks i think thats all there was im not sure though ha i remember adopting you i don't think i own you anymore :(

After you adopted me, I didn't think you gave me up. :lol:

 

i didn't give you up i think someone deleted it of my website :(

 

wrote a poem when i found out my ex boyfreind was moving want to he... read it??

Please post it.

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the words you never should say

 

You talk to me

smile

we get along great but you don't try any more

i wonder why

i want you to tryt you forever

i tell you you're mean

you smile

you look at me

we smile

we sit close

smile

when i get near you my whole world smiles

i want us to be together

you smile at me

i smile back

we conect face to face

smile to smile

but then you said it

my smiling world took a toll

now it's a black abis of tears and pain

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the words you never should say

 

You talk to me

smile

we get along great but you don't try any more

i wonder why

i want you to tryt you forever

i tell you you're mean

you smile

you look at me

we smile

we sit close

smile

when i get near you my whole world smiles

i want us to be together

you smile at me

i smile back

we conect face to face

smile to smile

but then you said it

my smiling world took a toll

now it's a black abis of tears and pain

Your poem is very touching. It is really good.

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the words you never should say

 

You talk to me

smile

we get along great but you don't try any more

i wonder why

i want you to tryt you forever

i tell you you're mean

you smile

you look at me

we smile

we sit close

smile

when i get near you my whole world smiles

i want us to be together

you smile at me

i smile back

we conect face to face

smile to smile

but then you said it

my smiling world took a toll

now it's a black abis of tears and pain

Your poem is very touching. It is really good.

thank you

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  • 3 months later...

Burden

No more stress

just happiness

I feel light

like the worlds problems have been lifted from my shoulders

I no longer feel the need to scream and shout

or rant and rave

just to love and to hold

I want this feeling to last

and as long as you stay by my side it will

 

 

Tornado

The thunder IS my heart pounding

the lightning IS the sparkle in your eyes

the rain IS the brholder of my love

each drop symbolizing the amount of it

The deapest puddles

couldn't even hold the happiness I feel when I'm with you

And all together

these feelings create a tornado

A tornado spinning with thoughts and memories

I'll always hold dear and never let go

 

 

Storm

as the rain falls

and the tear drops splash

each passing moment

my thoughts lead straight to you

the tears hold memories

memories worth fighting for

and the rain holds the love

and passion I feel

as the puddles grow

so does my heart

creating more room for you.

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Burden

No more stress

just happiness

I feel light

like the worlds problems have been lifted from my shoulders

I no longer feel the need to scream and shout

or rant and rave

just to love and to hold

I want this feeling to last

and as long as you stay by my side it will

 

 

Tornado

The thunder IS my heart pounding

the lightning IS the sparkle in your eyes

the rain IS the brholder of my love

each drop symbolizing the amount of it

The deapest puddles

couldn't even hold the happiness I feel when I'm with you

And all together

these feelings create a tornado

A tornado spinning with thoughts and memories

I'll always hold dear and never let go

 

 

Storm

as the rain falls

and the tear drops splash

each passing moment

my thoughts lead straight to you

the tears hold memories

memories worth fighting for

and the rain holds the love

and passion I feel

as the puddles grow

so does my heart

creating more room for you.

Magnificent!!!

*hands Kay The Platinum Moon Award*

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Burden

No more stress

just happiness

I feel light

like the worlds problems have been lifted from my shoulders

I no longer feel the need to scream and shout

or rant and rave

just to love and to hold

I want this feeling to last

and as long as you stay by my side it will

 

 

Tornado

The thunder IS my heart pounding

the lightning IS the sparkle in your eyes

the rain IS the brholder of my love

each drop symbolizing the amount of it

The deapest puddles

couldn't even hold the happiness I feel when I'm with you

And all together

these feelings create a tornado

A tornado spinning with thoughts and memories

I'll always hold dear and never let go

 

 

Storm

as the rain falls

and the tear drops splash

each passing moment

my thoughts lead straight to you

the tears hold memories

memories worth fighting for

and the rain holds the love

and passion I feel

as the puddles grow

so does my heart

creating more room for you.

Magnificent!!!

*hands Kay The Platinum Moon Award*

YAY! Thanks.

 

 

Firefly

As I walk in the dark,

Little lights blink one after the other

In a pattern so gracious I could cry

The fireflies lead the way n the dark

as I try to find the path to you ropen arms and open heart'

all the little lights line up in to straight lines

tracing the outsides of the path

and I find my way to your arms and heart

the you kiss me so passionetly

the lights dim to moonlight and starlight

then the kis ends

and the path is relit

and I enter your heart

and it locks

now I'm held there forever

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Blade of blood

My world is shaking

I feel the blood dripping down my arm

But I don’t feel the blade across my skin

I feel better once the knife has parted my skin

Creating a gash

The blood gushes

The tears stream

The pain is gone

And peace is restored.

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  • 2 weeks later...

Why Is It You I Love?

 

My heart wants you

But my head says no

You hurt me once

Nothing’s going to stop you from hurting me again

No matter how bad you felt the first time

It wasn’t bad enough

It’s not going to keep you form letting me feel that pain

From pushing me back into my darkest days

To bringing the depression

From letting me sink into my hollow heart

You’ll hurt me again

I’m not stupid

I won’t fall for the, I-felt-so-bad-the-first-time-I-could-never-do-it-again, game

I don’t want to

But I know I will

My heart longs for the touch of your lips

The touch of your hands

My ears crave the sound of your voice

I want you next to me

I want you in my arms

I need you here,

And for me to want, to wish and to need,

Is the worst feeling in my life all because I know,

That deep down in my hollow, dark, empty and craving heart,

You’ll hurt me no matter what you say

Because you’ll either take me and rip my heart out

Or not take me at all;

Leaving me with a feeling of being shot in the heart.

It makes me cry to know that,

You are the reason for my sole existence

That my whole life revolves around one person

And sadly that person is you.

 

 

I can't believe it but this is about Teddy.

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:blink: :blink: He doesn't deserve you. You are much too good for him. :blink: :blink:

Well I really love like him.

You always want what you can't have.

ok no no no here is a text convo wee had.(yes we do talk on the phone too)

Me: Teddy I like you again, but I'm afraid to like you, because you hurt me once before and I don't want to feel that pain again.

Teddy: Then have me.

Me: I don't want to get hurt.

Teddy I won't. I felt so bad the first time, I would never do it again.

Me promise?

Teddy: Promise.

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Clod Sunshine

 

I’m awakening slowly

As the rush of morning light

Flows in from the open window

I feel the warmth

Yet I gain nothing from it

As I lay shivering

I’ll forever have a longing

For another persons love

And now I fall to sleep fast

Forever

 

 

 

Broken

 

Such a lonely day

Here in my heart

I miss you all the time

Such a lonely day

Here in my heart

You left me

When you said you would stay

 

I’m drowning in a pit of black blood

The blood that bleeds from my heart

 

All the words you said was lies

All the lies you used were truth

It’s all too confusing

That’s something I realize

But you put that upon yourself

 

I’ve made it a lonely day

There in your heart

Created a lonely day

In your chest

I felt you

When I said I would stay

And for that I’m sorry

You’re drowning in a pit of black blood

The blood that comes from your heart

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

thank you and you're welcome.

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

thank you and you're welcome.

Would you please make a post in my topic and let me place your picture in the post?

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

thank you and you're welcome.

Would you please make a post in my topic and let me place your picture in the post?

The best friend of Horatio....

 

that one???

oh well that's where I'm putting it.

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

thank you and you're welcome.

Would you please make a post in my topic and let me place your picture in the post?

The best friend of Horatio....

 

that one???

oh well that's where I'm putting it.

Perfect! You did great! Thanks again.

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Thank you.

I really love the picture in your siggy!

I took it at an air show with my phone. that little silver dot at the bottom... yeha theats one of the planes

Outstanding!!!!!!

*gives Kay The Blue Moon Award for the outstanding picture*

 

I was wondering what that little dot was. Thanks for letting me know.

thank you and you're welcome.

Would you please make a post in my topic and let me place your picture in the post?

The best friend of Horatio....

 

that one???

oh well that's where I'm putting it.

Perfect! You did great! Thanks again.

I'm bored so..................

 

 

YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!

lol.

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