[-awards the Arkcher seal of Approval-
S'good so far. I think it could get somewhere.
Yeah, there were a few speellng mistaeks, but its all good so long as SNAP IS REALLY SNAP IN DISGUISE-kind of thing doesn't happen.
And I don't know anything about orchestra or any other high school [or any school, for that matter] conduct. So don't ask me. D:
Yes, the lack of inserts and divisions bothers me. D: Format makes things much more readable.
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